Writer's Challenge: Make me your masterpiece  

curious082385 31F
4230 posts
4/8/2006 4:31 pm

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Writer's Challenge: Make me your masterpiece


Paint for me a portrait
of our rapture and desire.
Spin awakened senses into
webs of vibrant color.
Hands touch softly, surely now
tracing lines of fire.
You the artist.
I the canvas.
In search of passion's masterpiece,
the wonder you inspire.

Compose for me your melody
and let my spirit soar.
Soul gives birth to your creation,
notes and chords, my inspiration.
Hearts beating now to the pulse of the drums,
driving us on as our symphony strums.
You the maestro.
I the score.
Breathe my song against your heart
to echo ever more.


If you haven't already, head over to caressmewell to vote. There are some awesome entries over there.

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11238 posts
4/9/2006 1:13 am


~ smilez ~

beautiful, good luck


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:08 am:
Yep, finally figured it out.

bardicman 50M

4/9/2006 7:22 am

Wonderful



I am not dead yet


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:09 am:
Thank you, dear Bard.

rm_1hotwahine 62F
21091 posts
4/9/2006 11:06 am

I love your imagery!
And the mood it sets is terrific.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:09 am:
Haha...that imagery was driving me crazy trying to capture the right feel.

rm_Bct2Esi 50M/50F
1375 posts
4/9/2006 11:35 am

Holy cow that is good I had a long time friend from High School ask me what I wanted for my birthday.....I tried putting into words what I wanted. This is it, you took the words right from my head and used them Wow How did you do that

I loved this, good luck

Hugs and smiles sweetie


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:10 am:
Ok, blushing like crazy now. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

dasher121 36M

4/9/2006 1:21 pm

great poem, def one of the best you have written yet Very much enjoyed reading that.


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:11 am:
The best? Ok, speechless now. Thank you.

TTigerAtty 62M

4/9/2006 1:35 pm

Very nice! Good luck in the contest!


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:11 am:
Thank you, both for the well wishes and for stopping by.

seek_u_topia 50M

4/9/2006 5:44 pm

fabulous...loved this one! such a nice flow and a wonderful mental picture. definitely keep writing! thanks!


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 12:12 am:
Thank you. It's one that has been floating around in my head for a while now, finally decided to write it down.

sassybelle21 32F
13313 posts
4/10/2006 2:13 am

Hey you know what? I love this very much!!


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 4:36 am:
I like it too. lol. Thanks!

aascrompn 42M
6444 posts
4/10/2006 8:50 am

Beautiful!


curious082385 replies on 4/10/2006 9:11 am:

HBowt2 58F

4/10/2006 3:54 pm

The music of love...beautiful...


curious082385 replies on 4/12/2006 1:49 am:
Thank you...I'm glad you enjoyed it. Very much loved reading your blog as well.

rm_SusieQ27 46F
2093 posts
4/11/2006 5:38 pm

Quite lovely

Luv n stuff {=} Susie {=}


curious082385 replies on 4/12/2006 11:45 pm:
Thank you.

rm_goddess1946 105F
13518 posts
4/12/2006 9:29 pm

beautiful!

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


curious082385 replies on 4/12/2006 11:45 pm:
Thank you...your opinion is one that I hold in high regard.

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