Starcrossed Love  

curious082385 31F
4230 posts
12/6/2005 1:38 am

Last Read:
4/2/2006 4:48 am

Starcrossed Love

The wind blows across your face
And as the hair blows away from your eyes I see the truth

Your eyes that are so clear
And so deep
I lose myself within them

So crystalline…
I forget the words I want to say
The anger I want to show you
The pain you have caused

I'll fall to my knees
In defeat before you
Unable to bear the sight
Of damage mirrored in your eyes
Of what we've done to each other

The damage that torments us daily...
I let go our dreams
Held secret from you
What you unknowingly
Needed most

You've broken my spirit,
You ripped my heart out
And placed it, still beating,
On the slaughtering block

And people have lined up

And waited for their turn

To slam their hammer of
Hate
Judgment
Accusation
Anger
Hurt
Fear

And through it all
You have remained at my side
I'm your Savior, your Angel
You're my Perfection, my Champion

Webs of pain and love
Ever spinning
Never ceasing


Efilnikufecin69 47M

12/6/2005 3:30 am

Beautiful MzZ!


nightstalker172 36M
1258 posts
12/6/2005 4:18 am

I dont know how you do it...every poem you write I seem to be able to relate so well to...


PrincessKarma 43F
6188 posts
12/6/2005 5:22 am

Why is it we hurt the ones we love the most?

The Big Bang was the mother of all orgasms.PrincessKarma


dasher121 36M

12/6/2005 9:08 am

"you've broken my spirit" that's a hell of a statement. Have def felt that before. I think that's more painful than having a broken heart. With heartache, you can drown it in temporary sulotions, distractions really. But to have your sprit broken, my god it does suck. You feel an emptiness tht nothing can fill, like a hunger that cant be sated.
I feel for you miss curious. Its a painful thing, but in the long run, you will become more for it, better. Finding a way to heal the soul isnt hard at all, it just takes time, time that you are ready for. And when you are ready, the answers will come.


ManinMcK 50M
23 posts
12/7/2005 12:58 am

Ok, for some reason, you seem to be lookng into the window of my soul. These words speak of my current expierence so well, I know i couldn't have voiced my pian any more clearly... Thank you... I have also learned from my pain that I am a better pes=rson than i thought I was, intersting mix of wanting to hurt back, but knowing that it is not in me to do so, not any more at least, or really ever i don't really know any more or care. I am on a different path now, and trying not to look back, except to see my mistakes and not repete them. Curious, how you do this, it is painfully beautiful... Again, Thank you.


curious082385 31F
4925 posts
12/9/2005 12:54 am

Manin - so sorry that is a pain that you have had to experience. It's a hard and lonely one to bear. But smiling for you that you are finding your way out of it. One step, one day at a time, right? But in that pain and in your endurance of it, you'll find yourself and strength you never knew you had.


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