waxing poetic...  

carmel62764 52F
191 posts
7/31/2006 5:08 pm

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10/1/2006 9:03 am

waxing poetic...


there seems to be a rather mistaken consensus that the carmeliscious one only writes about her sexual exploits and misadventures, and doesn't have anything else to offer...FOOLISH MORTALS!! I do write about other things--as you will soon see!

I haven't written any poetry in a number of years, so this will be a return to my familiar "stomping grounds":

"Whisper"

softly, my love
don't say out loud
what I can hear your heart saying

words are unnecessary

silently your body calls to me
in passionate restraint
across the crowded room

words are useless

i feel you near me
and yet you are not around
only a glance and then you look away

words are worthless

a gentle brush of your hand
causes me to close my eyes
falling against you in quiet rapture

words will only get in the way

your body against mine
such an exquisite feeling
flesh against flesh
you enter me
i become you
a momentary whisper of passion
finds its way into our souls
fill me with your essence
over and over
let me feel your thunder
and i will become your lightning
i want to be with you
i need to be in you
there is no need to speak
we are already as one

words pollute the experience

pressed against you in a wet dream
you are my reality
i will become your necessity

what will words accomplish here?

you know what i want
i have what you need
whisper--and let it be...

boy, i sure hope people like this--those who don't, please form an orderly line at my @$$ and feel the warmth of my sincerity when i say "i don't care"...

carmel62764 52F

8/5/2006 1:09 am

    Quoting cclay104:
    Ma i would love to be inside u.
really? hmmm...let me think about this for a moment--you're 21 and black (same age as my son) and I'm 42 and have already stated that I like white men...gee, do ya get the feeling that my reply to you will likely be NO? or better yet...HELL NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Even if you were white, my answer would be no due to the fact that you're my son's age--and that would be like sleeping with my son (GROSS!)! I realize that there are people that are into that kind of thing (more power to them) but I am not!! so sorry hun, you'll have to pursue your fantasy elsewhere!


rm_6menu9 45M
33 posts
8/6/2006 10:33 am

I was never very good with poetry. Reading or writing it. But that was spectacular. Keep up the good work.


carmel62764 52F

8/6/2006 12:32 pm

    Quoting rm_6menu9:
    I was never very good with poetry. Reading or writing it. But that was spectacular. Keep up the good work.
thank you for the words of encouragement--it's much appreciated!! smooches to you!!


Phantomdude02 59M
7 posts
8/28/2006 5:22 pm

Carmel,
Wow!! I impressed! You did a good as a poet. Go you have any more poetry for us? A women of many Talents.


carmel62764 52F

8/28/2006 5:53 pm

    Quoting Phantomdude02:
    Carmel,
    Wow!! I impressed! You did a good as a poet. Go you have any more poetry for us? A women of many Talents.
well thank you phantom for the compliments...and welcome to the blog!! i will see if i can mix up something special for you...


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