My writing..  

carebearluv2 42F
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11/12/2005 10:41 pm

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My writing..

I am a published poet. Hope one day to be a published author. Here is a poem I wrote that I would like to share. Please respect my work, it is copyrighted and reproduction of any kind is prohibited.

The glass tear

A stream of light shines on a single tear
an illusion of glass to all those near
For it is in this tear that sadness lives
beneath the heart, beneath one's ribs
Love is gone, emptiness remains
darkness stabbed with searing pains
Red trickles down at my feet
blood its not, it's pain that's seeped
from my soul, deep down inside
right below with all the lies
This single tear will run its course
and all that will be left is remorse
for the glass will shatter with the pain
and only darkness will remain


tillerbabe 56F

11/12/2005 11:55 pm

That's beautiful! Keep sharing with us K? {=}


carebearluv2 42F

11/13/2005 7:50 am

Thanks for stopping by Till and for the kind words! I read your blog frequently and always enjoy it. I will keep trudging on with this blog and see where it leads me. I have other works to share in due time. After all, can't show my huge (lol) audience everything in one day, can I? LOL


bardicman 50M

11/13/2005 6:45 pm

Very beautiful. The poem in really good too



I am not dead yet


carebearluv2 42F

11/13/2005 8:16 pm

Thank you bardic..glad you liked it!


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