My Fortress  

boaz1172 50M
76 posts
11/30/2005 12:20 am

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12/10/2014 8:59 pm

My Fortress


Please don't ask me to commit
That type of relationship, I am ill of it

My desire for you is intense
and I say this to you
For my care and respect for you is emmense

Committal for me, well that is a sin
I refuse to ever fall in love again
No more hopes and dreams
No more winning teams
I've lost to love too many times
To ever again believe in love's rhyme

While I stand firm by your side
I'm sick and tired of Loves roller coaster ride

I bet on love and lost
Put my faith in it and was double crossed

All I received was lost dreams and broken faith
knowing full well that with broken hearts
No one could never be safe

Brick by defensive brick I have laid
Watch in silence, for you have no say
A wall so dense and thick
You can't even make out my hearts faint tick
A fortress ascending into the clouds
Dawning my heart's death shroud

My heart is safe at last
Locked inside it's controlled brick cast

rm_bakekang777 42F
48 posts
12/2/2005 3:40 am

Hope I didnt give a wrong impression when I was trying to speak out my wierd silly thoughts, well it wasnt for me , maybe a little reflection from what a girl is lamenting about.....Neither would I will commit myself, im still wounded , and in the middle of the battle still


rm_bakekang777 42F
48 posts
12/2/2005 3:44 am

Can a little respect leads to commitment too?Just an innocent silly question again....


boaz1172 50M
54 posts
12/2/2005 7:13 pm

Well I believe that: you can't commit; you can't have a friendship; you can't enjoy a relationship and you can't love if there is no respect involved. Respect acts as an accellerant for all other feelings.


rm_bakekang777 42F
48 posts
12/4/2005 7:51 am

and you will always be my boy lolly


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