Some Poetry  

bigredeatsbush 51M/50F
305 posts
8/9/2005 3:24 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Some Poetry

My first attempt in quite a while...
I suprised myself

The Perfect Moment

A perfect moment as if time stood still,
She held me close as she took my will.
Bodies entangled outside and in
Released, Replaced, Revampted Within

A feeling beyond the words alone
Emotion departs the long day gone
Confused before and not knowing how
Is it Love or Lust that fills me now

The perfect moment, a reciprical need
I give to her everything I need
By giving it all returns more yet
Synergy intense, removes regret


Philosophy_N_Sex 49M/47F

8/10/2005 8:48 am

hey not bad at all.


bigredeatsbush 51M/50F

8/10/2005 8:50 pm

Thank-you P&S and Kate! Kate, no, you Rock! Thanks for visiting!


SexyMac25 30M
99 posts
8/10/2005 9:14 pm

Hey,
WHY DONT YOU WRITE MORE?
that was great
SexyMac25


Theflinkychick 105F

8/10/2005 10:05 pm

good stuff, thanks...

Not all who wander are lost.


bigredeatsbush 51M/50F

8/11/2005 9:22 pm

Mac & FlinkyChick - Thanks for the visit and the encouragement. I will see what I can do to publish more poetry soon.


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