Your Smile is My World  

bardicman 50M
7540 posts
3/13/2006 2:13 pm

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3/16/2006 5:39 pm

Your Smile is My World

"I am just a girl,"
were the words she said to me.
So I looked deep into her mind,
and nothing "just" did I see.
A mind so deep and caring,
yet so troubled by the past.
Living and learning through all the pains,
of loves that did not last.
A soul of glowing goodness
yet ripped and torn to shreds
It is my longing to see her complete
as together we forge ahead.

"I am just a girl,"
She told me. Yet I just cannot believe,
there is anything "just" about her,
when beauty is all I see.
Her eyes fill me with such a longing
a passion for life and love
Her laughter is the sounds of angels
Perhaps she has fallen from above
Perhaps she is "just" an Angel
Sent down to walk this earth
to love a forlorn stranger
and show him he has great worth

Fate is smiling brightly
like the sunlight in her hair.
The beauty of spring is all around
but to her, it just can't compare.
For her beauty is far greater
than the wonders of this world
She is beautiful through and through
so much more than "just" a girl.

I am not dead yet

SolarPowered0 67M
8018 posts
3/13/2006 10:13 pm

And, it's not "just" any poem,
But a work of the subtle mind
Of a man whose heart has shown
He's as gentle as he's kind.


trish778 43F

3/13/2006 11:54 pm

Very nice! I like.

tillerbabe 56F

3/14/2006 12:03 am

Interesting. "Synchronicity"....I've been pondering a post I wrote long ago..and now you write this.

[post 110747]

Makes me think.

Your writing is very beautiful.

MaggiesWishes 60F

3/14/2006 12:15 am

And that is what being beautiful to his eyes means.
Simply beautiful.


pinkzplaytoyz 50F

3/14/2006 4:22 am

just divine

Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

3/14/2006 4:38 am

what lovely and heartfelt words...beautifully written, bard!

TTigerAtty 62M

3/14/2006 10:35 am

Ditto what Solar said! I have seen to many women use the word "just" or "common" when referring to themselves when they JUST need to be built up, encouraged, loved ...

And now, Bard, it's college hoops time! Are you a Razorback fan?

You are cordially invited to join us for the First Annual Blogville NCAA Tournament Watch Party at the palatial estate of [blog goddess1946]. Details are provided in the following posts:

1. Open Invitation - NCAA Tournament Action In The Blogville Hot Tub!,
2. NCAA Tournament Action In The Blogville Hot Tub!, and
3. [post 269388].

jadedbabe78 106F

3/14/2006 12:03 pm

Awwwww , absolutely lovely.

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:20 pm

Solar - Thank you.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:21 pm

Trish - I thank you.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:42 pm

Tiller - Damn, I read that post. It was almost like looking in a mirror. I don't know what to tell you. I have often wondered why women see the need to fuck with my head when I freely give all that I am. Like you, my ex's always seem to wander back into my life wanting what they had back.

Crazy, I am losing my mind.


I have finally found it again.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:50 pm

Maggie - You are so right.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:51 pm

Pink, Thank you. She is the one that is divine.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:53 pm

Louisa, Thank you babe. You know I love you. (not in THAT way)

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:54 pm

Sweetneeds - Thanks, making people smile is my forte. Feel free to come by anytime you need one. I promise to do my best.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:55 pm

Tiger - How right you are. A Lady needs her self esteemed super charged on a daily basis. Razorbacks? As soon as Frank Broyles is gone we can talk about em

Thanks for the invite.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:56 pm

-Disaster, Lucky guy.... I hope she feels lucky and not cursed

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/14/2006 4:57 pm

Jaded - Awwwwww.. your ass is on my blog... umm do we have an "opening" bid yet?


I am not dead yet

oldman1776 78M
3164 posts
3/15/2006 7:13 pm

beautiful Young man.

curious082385 31F
4925 posts
3/16/2006 4:30 am

Lucky lucky girl!
And you say you aren't a poet...

bardicman 50M

3/16/2006 4:57 am

Oldman - One day you are calling me ugly and the next day you are calling me a beautiful young man. you are starting to scare me.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/16/2006 4:58 am

Curious - I am the one that is lucky. If but for a very short while.

I am not dead yet

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
3/16/2006 8:09 am


bardicman 50M

3/16/2006 5:39 pm

Gotd - Thank you. As are you my friend.

I am not dead yet

HBowt2 59F

3/18/2006 4:24 pm

We're all more then just much more....

mikemay4 41M
2 posts
3/24/2006 12:50 pm

i love to fu

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