Sad, Forlorn, Poetry...........  

bardicman 50M
7540 posts
11/5/2005 5:46 pm

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Sad, Forlorn, Poetry...........

I have noticed that many people like to write and leave such sad poetry. It stirs my inner emotions and almost makes me want to weep....
I love to write poetry, nonsensical and whimsical crap but poetry none the less. (I wonder if nonsensical is a word....)
I guess I need to write sad poems in order to stir the deep emotions of those that read it.

I will love you through time,
Was your promise to me.
Today and tomorrow, All eternity.
I planned our future and you would be there
I kissed your lips and stroked your hair.
You called me lover and you called me friend
You swore to be faithful never seeing an end.
So it was no surprise
That I was left on the ground
The day I awoke and you weren't around.
You took the all of life from me
when you parted
When I tried to stand,
I strained,
and then farted.

I am not dead yet

caressmewell 53F

11/5/2005 8:09 pm

lol - that is a sad poem.

goddessofbitches 41M/33F

11/5/2005 8:52 pm nice.....letting one rip....

No offense...but that is just like a man to start getting emotional...and when he realizes he is...he lets one rip to kill the


Always The Bitch

themisskrissy 56F
2302 posts
11/5/2005 10:04 pm

do you have an op date for your little buddies yet?

Virtue Alone Ennobles

rm_bella_ 47F
4030 posts
11/6/2005 5:55 pm

great poem but the end was yuck!

(Princess Lips)

11/6/2005 11:33 pm



spinmedown 49M
3626 posts
11/8/2005 1:57 pm

Let it out, Bard.
Let it out...
*sniff* *eyes watering*
...I meant.....
*sniffle* *tearing up a little*

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde

MaggiesWishes 60F

11/9/2005 4:39 am

oh... that brought tears to my eyes.... ~wait~ was it the "gas"?

cute, Bard!

UvannaHumpalot 37F

11/11/2005 10:27 am

wow....what talent you have when you're gassy.....i would imagine you're perfectly brilliant when you're dropping a couple kids off in the pool.......maybe you'll share that work with us sometime.....if we're worthy...

spinmedown 49M
3626 posts
11/11/2005 7:02 pm

Psssst..... *whispers* Don't tempt him Uvanna. Seriously, you don't know what this man is capable of. Now let's get out of here while we still can.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde

Hippink 35F
4499 posts
11/20/2005 11:44 am

hey, That rhymed!
I just bunny fluffed, I was laughin so hard.....

rm_DaphneR 58F
7938 posts
12/14/2005 9:54 pm

***places a stick-up and leaves***

Have tongue, will use it. Repeatedly.

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