Is This the Real Life... Is this Just Fantasy.......  

bardicman 50M
7540 posts
12/10/2005 9:21 am

Last Read:
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Is This the Real Life... Is this Just Fantasy.......

Mysterious conversations inflame,
smoldering curiosity.
I sit and wonder who you are,
someone so much like me.
Our brains so intertwined,
confused and twisted mass.
Our thoughts are as revealing,
as a lone smoked pane of glass.
I try to look inside it,
Vague images I can spy.
Clarity is out of reach,
A shadow passes by.
Yet somehow we are connected,
You make all my thoughts seem sane.
As though you are standing with me,
On the distant ethereal plane.
My arms reach out to hold you,
but I'm grasping smoky air.
In the distance I hear a chuckle,
and I wonder...
were you ever...
really there...

© JDL 2005 <--My publiclits said I should add that.




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SolarPowered0 67M
8018 posts
12/10/2005 10:28 am

Bard...

Never, and I mean NEVER ignore what a publicist says. Especially if they're working on strictly a percentage! lmao

In those parot-phrased immortal words of T.A. Edison, '...it's 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration.' How many lose sight of this?! How many don't even know this?! And then... some don't need to know this, do they?!

Solar...


bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 11:19 am

Solar - How do you handle a COMBO-MAN
bardicman


MAN HANDLERS !!!!!
hippie_square sultryvirgo

**"In those parot-phrased immortal words of T.A. Edison, '...it's 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration.' How many lose sight of this?! How many don't even know this?! And then... some don't need to know this, do they?! **"
So what are you saying.. I should give up the deep stuff?



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SolarPowered0 67M
8018 posts
12/10/2005 1:24 pm

Bard...

Never give up the deep stuff! When it flows like honey warmed in a double-boiler, just enjoy that smooth, slow burn in your throat. The others may perspire upon taking a sip. You, on the other hand, have no need to carry a handkerchief. T.A. would have been elated had it been nearly as simple for him.

Solar...


bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 2:07 pm

Will - I will send you a list in the mail.... I already had a head ache.. I was just wanting to share it... ROFL



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bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 2:10 pm

Solar - They didnt have nyquil for Edison to get smackered on...



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Valdrane78 38M

12/10/2005 3:06 pm

Nice one dude, keep em comming!

BANG! POW! BOOM! a study in useless knowledge and sick humor!
I want a damn soundtrack to my blog!


bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 3:30 pm

Val - Thanks man.. I try..



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rm_1hotwahine 63F
21091 posts
12/10/2005 5:44 pm

I'm curious...was the post inspired in general, or specifically?

Either way, I liked it.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


rm_DaphneR 58F
7938 posts
12/10/2005 6:16 pm

One day you'll be surprised. You'll reach out and your arms won't come back empty.

Have tongue, will use it. Repeatedly.


LIBlonde97 40F
1028 posts
12/10/2005 6:19 pm

WOW!

I wonder who your inspiration is lately?????

Hehe...

XOXO-
Amy


spinmedown 49M
3626 posts
12/10/2005 8:46 pm

The deep stuff suits you.
Nicely done.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 10:37 pm

Wahine - Thanks.. This piece was inspired by a very mysterious individual..



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bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 10:42 pm

DaphneR - Someday....Someway..... Some other word......



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bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 10:43 pm

Liblonde - I wonder how I wonder.....



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bardicman 50M

12/10/2005 10:43 pm

Spinman - Thanks bro.. Appreciate it



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GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
12/11/2005 5:32 am

very nice poem...

thx


bardicman 50M

12/11/2005 7:01 am

Goddess - Thank you very much..



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wife4stranger 57F

12/11/2005 9:55 am

Very nice Bard. Odd, it brings up some thoughts I've had recently...
It's nice, but a bit disconcerting when you find someone out here that 'gets' you.


bardicman 50M

12/11/2005 11:40 am

wife - disconcerting.... yes...



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rm_AmishAmy 100F
246 posts
12/11/2005 6:37 pm

You are the captain of this ship
Do not hesitate
To enter uncharted waters…

Revel in the undertaking,
Be cugiddy in the possibilities…

Take advantage of this voyage
To journey within
Discover your treasures
And the treasures of others…

Don’t fear the shadow
Or doubt its presence
It’s there for a reason
But only you know what that reason is….

Persevere through tormenting skies
And overwhelming waves
The clearing will come
And you will realize the worth of the challenge
Because you are the captain of this ship….


rm_DaphneR 58F
7938 posts
12/11/2005 7:27 pm

growl

Have tongue, will use it. Repeatedly.


Nikki_Starr 41F

12/12/2005 3:33 am

Your publicist is a smart man. Nice.


bardicman 50M

12/12/2005 4:20 pm

Daph - Grrrrrr baby... grrrrrrrr



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bardicman 50M

12/12/2005 4:22 pm

Nikki - your photographer is a lucky man



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bardicman 50M

12/12/2005 4:47 pm

Amishmystery -
I captain my ship most cautiously,
My eyes scanning left and right.
For I fear there dangers lurking,
that could sink my ship this night.
Yea, though I long for the treasures,
that lay hidden in the brume.
I know the coral and the shallows,
could seal me to a watery tomb
so forgive my time of my travel
but please await me day by day
for when I reach my desitnation
I shall forever stay.



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