I call when I want to call...  

bardicman 50M
7540 posts
1/23/2006 8:22 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

I call when I want to call...

I was visiting my friend Louisa's blog and noticed she had written a wonderful poem about her relationship with the Grim Reaper himself. It inspired me to respond to her. Actually, I think she inspired Thanatos to channel a message to her from him.......


Flirt with me my sexy one,
and think you're tempting fate.
You come willing to my abode,
and think you desecrate.
It is only I that does allow,
your entry as my guest.
Only I that knows for sure the time,
your soul I shall harvest.

You smile and you lead me on,
foolish girl you should rethink.
for you really do not believe,
I could consume you in a wink.
You suddenly don't feel so ready,
Your time you want to treasure.
Your desires really matter not,
I shall take you at my pleasure.

My pleasure shall come some sunny day,
When you are fulfilling all your dreams.
When you've learned not to expect me
and I've grown tired of your schemes.
It is then that I shall show you,
just whom has been playing who
Yes, this is a game thats being played,
only I am playing you.

You will no longer feel so powerful,
when I tire of this play.
You will learn who's kept things orderly
when your life is in disarray
You will beg and plead and cry for me,
and long to draw your final breath.
Your soul will linger as long as I please,
then game over,
winner me,
I am Death.





I am not dead yet


spinmedown 49M
3626 posts
1/23/2006 9:06 am

All I ever get are surveys and sales people.

It's been raining for days.

Most people are other people... FUCKING CHARACTER LIMIT!!! ~Oscar Wilde


pinkplaytoyz 50F

1/23/2006 9:10 am

deep dark and lovely


angelbaby4650 104F

1/23/2006 9:39 am

The world of Bard is an extraordinary one. Very thoughtful and insightful.

Angel...


rm_1hotwahine 63F
21091 posts
1/23/2006 9:56 am

Yeah, I think he was the lead singer for a house band at the Ramada in the early 80s.

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


LadytoPleaseYou 64F
5447 posts
1/23/2006 10:21 am

Excellent answer Bard.

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


aascrompn 42M
6444 posts
1/23/2006 11:49 am

Now that's a little eerie...


Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

1/23/2006 1:12 pm

I throw my head back
and laugh at your attempt
to keep me at bay
to wield your feeble strength

Surely you realize
it is I who weaves the plot
whether I play your game
determines if we stop

Never underestimate
the knowledge that I keep
our lovely interaction
indeed, keeps you at my feet

So tell me, Mister Death
did you suspect the catch
but much more to the point
isn't it you that's met your match?


oldman1776 78M
3164 posts
1/23/2006 2:21 pm

excelent Sir very deep.


digdug41 49M

1/23/2006 2:23 pm

you's a bad motha...sssshhh!

roaming the cyber streets of blogland


ArealUnicorn 44F

1/23/2006 2:47 pm

omg...u 2 have something going on I have never got shivers from reading anything before bravo sister act 4 u....wow...


rm_hinkawaza 52M
371 posts
1/23/2006 3:22 pm

Oh no, I think we've lost Bard to the darkside!

PS-great work!


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 4:34 pm

And a Jehovas Witness Spinmedown.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 4:35 pm

Yes I am Pink. Tell me about my poem though. How did you like it?



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 4:41 pm

Angel - Welcome to my world. It tends to change gears alot but it can be a sweet ride.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 4:55 pm

Wahine - Actually I was the keyboardist for the Holiday Inn house band in the mid 80's.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 4:58 pm

Lady - Thank you for that.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:01 pm

aascrompn - Thanks man.. Blogging is really fun somedays.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:12 pm

Laugh at me my little sister,
have a hearty little chuckle.
but when the time has come for you,
its your knees that will buckle.

You play a game thats dangerous,
you don't even realize.
You think you can contol me,
like I'm just one of the guys.

I have played this game before,
you are not my first.
Give me the best shot you have,
I will give you my worst.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:16 pm

Divinity - Thanks.. I still am not convinced that my name and the word awesome belong in the same sentence.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:21 pm

Oldman - You not that shallow yourself you know.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:26 pm

Digdug - Ahh the ego that one can assume with one assumes the role of Thanatos.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:32 pm

Unicorn - Thanks, just a little something in my growth experience. Playing off of and expanding on the works of others.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 5:32 pm

Hinky, I am your father.. Come to the dark side...



I am not dead yet


Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

1/23/2006 5:37 pm

the gauntlet's been thrown
line up, take your bets
this is only the beginning
you've seen nothing yet

have you all noticed
is it not abundantly clear
death threatened to take me
yet I am still here

so who would you say
possessed the upper hand
this sexy little girl's plot
or Death's mortal plan?

I will taunt him and tease him
with a smile and a wink
buy myself another day or two
what do you think?

who will prevail
in this sensuous game
where the stakes are so high
if i'm to see daylight again


onelittlesecret 33M
1579 posts
1/23/2006 6:02 pm

LMAO!

YES!!! I love it!


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 6:35 pm

You get so excited
yet I sit and stare
Those are dangerous thougts
You better beware

Taunt me and tease me
if that's your desire
I am immune to your flesh
not what I require

Though supple and soft
and lightly perfumed
powder and make up
so sexily groomed

feel me come closer
your heart turning flips
a chill up your spine
from my soft fingertips

cold breath on your neck
Are you really secure
I know my affect
I know your moisture

Dance with me pet
its the latest fasion
only you want so much more
you want my passion

You want me to hold you
in deaths last embrace
It's the final fear
that you want to face

You think you can beat me
and always live on
but you know all it takes
is one kiss
and you're gone.



I am not dead yet


rm_titsandtires 51M/41F
3656 posts
1/23/2006 7:17 pm

good stuff bardicman. i'm impressed! and what the hell is going on with you and sister act? damn, this is getting hot!

tires


Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

1/23/2006 7:21 pm

do i really wish to win
this life or death game
for in your defeat
i’d then take your name

or perhaps i'd assume
a role by your side
an eternity of darkness
as your deathly bride

so while victory could be mine
perhaps i’ll let you win
surely you’ll give me amnesty
because in life, we’ll meet again

the choice is now yours
as i lie in your embrace
will you let me live
or give me death’s taste

consider my future,
in determining my fate
i’ve pled for my life
offering the deals that i’ll make

so give me the verdict
will i face another day
so that we might continue
our passionate play

no matter the outcome
i haven’t any clues
will i really win
or did i ultimately lose


catseyes23 61F

1/23/2006 7:50 pm

Interesting indeed Bard...

Cats...


barbiebunny 36F
5597 posts
1/23/2006 8:02 pm

MMMMMMmmmmmmmmmm I reallylike this 1 bard well done!

Its good to be...ME


LadytoPleaseYou 64F
5447 posts
1/23/2006 8:15 pm

This is breathtaking please do continue this dance of death and mockery

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 8:43 pm

I have tasted your life
I have tasted your soul
I now have such a desire
to keep you all whole

To prove I could win
would be my defeat
for in you my love
I feel most complete

Share with me my tasks
stand eternally by my side
Be complete with me
in death
be my bride.



I am not dead yet


Sister_Act_4_You 38F/38F

1/23/2006 9:20 pm

do i really wish to win
this life or death game
for in your defeat
i’d then take your name

or perhaps i'd assume
a role by your side
an eternity of darkness
as your deathly bride

so while victory could be mine
perhaps I’ll let you win
surely you’ll give me amnesty
because in life, we’ll meet again

the choice is now yours
as I lie in your embrace
will you let me live
or give me death’s taste

consider my future,
in determining my fate
i’ve pled for my life
offering the deals that I’ll make

so give me the verdict
will i face another day
so that we might continue
our passionate play

no matter the outcome
i haven’t any clues
will i really win
or did i ultimately lose


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 9:29 pm

tires - Thanks man.. not much going on except the artistry of mutual muse for this encounter



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 9:32 pm

Cats - Thanks. having alot of fun with this one.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 9:48 pm

Lady - Hmm It looks like the lady wishes to honor your request.



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/23/2006 9:50 pm

I have tasted your life
I have tasted your soul
I now have such a desire
to keep you all whole

To prove I could win
would be my defeat
for in you my love
I feel most complete

Share with me my tasks
eternally by my side
Be complete with me
in death
be my bride.



I am not dead yet


LadytoPleaseYou 64F
5447 posts
1/24/2006 6:17 am

Will the temptress accept death's offer to be his bride when she realizes that she will spend the rest of her life/death looking into the dark hollow eyes of death and be bound to a preternatuaral being to whom death is his life? She of such beauty and full of life herself? Stay tuned......

PENIS CHARMING....where are you?


bardicman 50M

1/24/2006 11:36 am

Yes she will Ladytoplease. Because death is such an erotic pleasure. The ultimate in dark foreboding. To hang at the edge of darkness and light. Judging the souls you collect for their journey....



I am not dead yet


rm_corezon 53F
3376 posts
1/24/2006 4:19 pm

forget poetry - I am inspired to pull out my light saber...


VTLakesideVixen 60F
458 posts
1/25/2006 6:39 am

I knew we had a few good writers here, but I never suspected something as thoughtfully written as this is. You both should collaborate and put out a book. Yes, it is that good!


bardicman 50M

1/25/2006 10:00 am

Corezone - hmmmm Light Sabre.. I bet my shwartz is bigger than yours



I am not dead yet


bardicman 50M

1/25/2006 10:03 am

VT - I have asked her if we could work together day and night for weeks on end to make this happen



I am not dead yet


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