Nighttrain: (repraise)  

barbiebunny 36F
6789 posts
9/16/2005 12:39 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Nighttrain: (repraise)

Nighttrain Sep 7, 2005 12:53 am
Mood: gloomy, 1791 views

unrelenting rhythm, rattle and hum
of the wheels
as they roll over the tracks
shaking them fiercely
that always keeps me awake.

a distant melody that's too loud to ignore.
Not even the darkness
that inundates the compartments at night
seems to help.
It is worse
at night
when the stars are the only lights visible
in the vast, muted space outside
whizzing by my window.

On this train,
a shadowy world
of sleeping figures
the Nightstalker roams free
With a devious, mischevious smile
knowing the next stop
and anticipating
a unique passinger
with a wide wikked grin
familiiar with the shakes.

She watches in the gloom
of the car
waits waits waits
for the thundering train to arrive
In a downpour of black rain on the tracks
She could feel him
She felt the train Shiver
As he came aboard
His black trench was soaked
His head turned down
She recognized his black boots....

Its good to be...ME

MrPloerty 55M

9/16/2005 4:33 am

Nice Poëm nice bunny

ThumbChickStool 33F

9/16/2005 9:26 am

Yay Bunny! Well written.

Many kisses

EdgeofdesireM 47M

9/17/2005 6:46 am

Ahhh. Looks like someone was quite naughty while I am "on assignment". Not that I sit in judgment, just in disappointment that I was not there to witness it firsthand.
Welcome back Barbie

As for this reprise.

With bootheel clicks
That boom like thunder in His approach
He comes
And He brings the furious storm

barbiebunny 36F
5597 posts
9/27/2005 1:48 pm

**and it is welcomed back**

Its good to be...ME

barbiebunny 36F
5597 posts
11/14/2005 7:44 pm

ty sir spamalot..wear the black boots

Its good to be...ME

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