Broken King  

barbiebunny 36F
6789 posts
11/8/2005 12:44 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Broken King

Broken King
Rise from your throne
of Numbness
Run your fingers over my body
Ill kiss your touch
and warm the feel gone icy

Of too long winters
spanned into years
Fighting to break away
to redeem parts of yourself
twisted and lost
you find yourself

Scratch me
make the effort
lean to kiss
forget regrets

Ignore your enemies
as I hold you tight
and shield you
from misfortune

(dedicated to my friend TiT)

~Cruella


Its good to be...ME


tillerbabe 56F

11/8/2005 11:07 pm

I love you for this! {=}


HardLuckSlim 66M

11/9/2005 9:49 am

mmmm ... pensive and poignant. Very fine writing, b.b. You do have a poets touch.

Slim


onelittlesecret 33M
1579 posts
11/9/2005 11:07 am

staggering
my sword dragging along the ground
as I swim in my fractured mind

collapsing
down on my knees
my head sagging forward

I feel
a gentle touch
fingers
under my chin
gently lifting my face
my eyes rise

a fair maiden
quiet in demeanor
leans down
and lightly kisses my forehead

beautiful poem


rm_luke69iner 48M
3275 posts
11/10/2005 3:05 am

Nice


S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
A persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma perciocche giammai di questo fondo
Non torno vivo alcun, s'i'odo il vero,
Senza tema d'infamia ti rispondo
.
~Dante~


Plano69 54M

11/10/2005 8:11 pm

and as the new dawn cracks the sky
the flames of the sun
ignites the sword
writhing with exploding rays
of golden light
searing any who dare defy
the legendary shedevil warrior
standing firm and unmovable
before the King...

...The Legend of BarbieBunny


barbiebunny 36F
5597 posts
11/11/2005 12:48 am

Oh you have no idea how much I love to read poetry.. thank you all for being so kind about mine..and those that wrote pieces put large smiles on my face..thank you.. we need more poerty in the world
B

Its good to be...ME


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

11/11/2005 11:19 am

So wonderful you are ...
and a wonderful friend as well ...

{=}


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