Would you touch me?  

angelofmercy5 59F
12148 posts
1/5/2006 6:41 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Would you touch me?

If I let you..
Would you touch me?
Would you touch my body
The way you touch my soul?

And would it feel
The way I think?
Would there be fire?
Or just the sigh of relief?

If I let you..
Would you touch me?


rednekmisplaced 48M/42F
5 posts
1/5/2006 9:17 am

Have you ever published your poetry? If not, I think you should seriously look into it. I definitely would purchase it. You have a gift of bringing your words and thoughts to life. I enjoy reading them everyday.


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/5/2006 9:53 am

rednekmisplaced....I have never been published. It has always been a dream of mine to write though. Maybe I should look into it. At any rate, you certainly made my day with your kind words.


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/5/2006 11:14 am

Fly, thank you. High words of praise from someone whose writing I respect.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
1/5/2006 11:49 pm

I agree, this is beautiful, Angel. It makes the imagination go straight there. hug, unlisted


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/6/2006 12:35 am

Happy New Year Polly! Glad you're back!


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/6/2006 6:40 am

Thanks unlisted....again, kind words from one whose writing I think is gifted.


tmdt4u 61M

1/6/2006 6:42 am

Well here i go again out in a completly diffrent place.Touch smell ,lick,taste,hear experiance. there is no end.

Well they say good poetry moves the soul and it is only a canvas to the paints of the soul/regardless it is good but only in fraction to what we think of you its creator


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/6/2006 8:22 am

Thanks tmdt4u! Have a great day!


VATraveler1948 68M

1/7/2006 11:26 am

Nice poetry, I like nice poetry... want to get together and make some rhymes of our own?


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/7/2006 1:06 pm

Thanks Vatraveler....are you new here? Thanks for stopping by.


rm_goddess1946 106F
13518 posts
1/7/2006 3:15 pm

sweet {=}

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


VATraveler1948 68M

1/8/2006 5:11 am

Angel,

Well, yes technically I am new here but I'm no stranger to AdultFriendFinder. I've been here before under several different names (and personas).

Who's to say that there wouldn't be both fire AND sighs of relief. Hell, there might even be a few screams of pure, unbridled passion. Besides, fire and sighs of relief are not mutually exclusive concepts.

(Y)


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/8/2006 9:45 am

Goddess...thanks. You are such an inspiration.


angelofmercy5 59F
17881 posts
1/9/2006 5:12 am

Vatraveler.....~sigh~....yep!


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