Riding into the Sunset of Satisfaction  

alice593 71M
43 posts
7/21/2005 9:34 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Riding into the Sunset of Satisfaction


It was just an ordinary day, the sun was shining and the breeze felt really good, as I went off into the hills. As I walked I heard the birds chirping merrily, and the squirrels were racing with each other from tree to tree. The rabbits were hopping and bouncing over each other, like kids playing leap frog. Oh, such a refreshing day. Hoping the day would never end. I met this gal, who was also walking and enjoying this beautiful day. As we walked and talked, we enjoy seeing the lush green rolling hills, as they seem to go on for miles and miles. The sun was creating the various different hues of green. Oh the great creation of the person above was in its splendor. The gal was a beautiful, vivacious lady. As she walked, her hips would sway back and forth like a gentle swing of a pendulum on a grandfather clock. Her breasts would bounce vigorously with every step she took. Her ruby red lips, slightly parted, glistened as the sun would shine onto them. Oh she was so inviting. I had to try to hide the bulge in the front of my shorts, because of how seductive she was, the arousal was tremendous. Her soft voice flirtatious.

We came to a glen, by a shiny, light blue pond and sat in the soft grass under a maple tree. We continued to talk with each other, and the urges in me seemed overwhelming but I had to keep them under control; for this woman of grace was very intriguing in body, and speech. She picked up her purse from the ground, and started looking for something. She accidently dropped it, and some of the things dropped out of it. I helped her pick them up and gave them to her. I gave her her compact back and she said thank you, she clasped onto my hand, oh so gently and rubbed the back of it slowly with her thumb. She pressed her ruby red lips against mine, and I felt their soft moistness. She said thank you for helping pick her things up. Oh the urges increased. She then twisted her body half way around and wrapped her arms around me, and planted a good sensual kiss on me and I responded the same way with her. We both massaged each other's back as we embraced. Our bodies were hot and sweaty. She stopped and removed her silky blouse, and I in return removed my light blue shirt. She revealed her D cup sized buxom beauties, for she had no bra on to support them. Her nipples were firm, from them rubbing on my chest while we were kissing. We started kissing sensually some more, and then she stopped again. This time she removed her denim shorts, so I did likewise as well as my already wet underpants, for she wore no panties either. I could see the furry crevice which seemed to have an open invitation for me to have sensual pleasure with this gal. I flicked her nipples with my tongue, as I engulfed some of her breasts in my mouth. Oh how much more rigid they became. I slowly licked my way down her slender quivering torso to her soft furry mound, and spead the protective sweaty flaps apart, and flicked her clit with my tongue. She started to moan, and some love juices started flowing out of her love pocket. My crotch was even with her mouth, as we were in the sixty nine position. My crotch was also sweating with anticipation. She put my shaft in her mouth, and her lips massaged it as she went up and down it. Oh how my body got so aroused and shaking strongly. We just both moaned in delight. Just before we came, we got into the regular position with her spreading her long lanky legs apart, and I inserted my shaft into her. Oh how warm and moist it felt when inside. We were like two pistons in low gear at first, but our engines reved faster and faster. We both let out our love juices at the same time. And when it was over we embraced each other for quite some time and kissed a lot more. Oh the satisfaction we both had. We walked down to the pool, with her in front of me, so we could clean up before putting our clothes back on. For dripping down her legs, were the love juices I spewed forth into her. Oh how the soft tissue in her butt bounced, and her breasts swayed back and forth, up and down. We swam a while, and then got dressed. We walked some more, and came upon a small ranch where they let people ride their horses. We got on, and by this time the sun was going down. So we rode off into the sunset, invigorated and satisfied.

wyvernrose 38F
3895 posts
7/21/2005 7:22 pm

One time as I gave her her compact back,
I would change to
As I handed her back her compact,
____________________________
for helping me pick her things up
this I would have within "" or
She said thank you for my helping her pick her things up.
________________________________________
She put my shaft in her mouth
___________________

but that's great a lovely tale, you are very descriptive to begin with, but as the encounter heats up it becomes less descriptive, you might want to go into more detail as to the encounter itself, I know sex is very difficult to describe without using alot of slang, but I am certain you could find ways to express it as descriptively as you do the introduction to the encounter

WyvernRose


alice593 71M

7/21/2005 11:48 pm

wyvernrose- Thank you for the helpful hints. Yes, oooops, it was my shaft instead of her shaft. Thank you also for the compliment. Really appreciated all you said. If I'm going to be a writer, I need people like you to point things out, and also suggest things.

mzhunyhole- Thank you also for the compliment. I try to write as I as I go along. I changed some things, but didn't catch some of the mistakes. That is why I am glad people like you and wyvernrose give good suggestions, and point out the good and bad. I can learn better that way, from other people's points of view. I picked the title, and near the end had to figure how to end it to match the title.


wyvernrose 38F
3895 posts
7/22/2005 7:01 am

very coool

WyvernRose


rm_Jezdatip 64F
1335 posts
8/4/2005 1:36 am

Even when you check for errors, your best proofreading may miss a couple..The more you write the easier it will be for you to link the title with the contents and ending..I enjoy reading your blog because of your realistic scripts.Keep doing what you do so well..


alice593 71M

8/11/2005 11:06 am

Jezdatip, thank you for appreciating what I have written.


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