Stripped and Bare (Poem)  

aknightwoarmor 49M
41 posts
6/21/2005 12:11 pm

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Stripped and Bare (Poem)

Stripped and bare,
Your lying and your lying there.
No where to hide,
No where to run.
Time to grab the pendulum of thought,
Time to remember things forgot.
That path that took us here,
The one that was filled with promises,
But ended with broken dreams.
Bridges passed, Bridges burned,
Nothing to Lose when it’s already Lost.
It’s not that I can’t forgive your sins,
But there is no way back to the beginning again.

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
6/21/2005 1:11 pm

Welcome to the land of blog ...

and such a nice poem ....

MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
6/21/2005 3:59 pm

hmmm....makes the sunrise thinks

live more, laugh often, love much

aknightwoarmor 49M
8 posts
6/21/2005 6:02 pm

Thanks for the comments, it is a bit sad I suppose. It's really meant to be melancholy. It can be viewed as a new beginning as well as an end of another.

stanley3335 53M/56F

6/21/2005 11:01 pm

sometimes when you burn your bridges, you light a new way. I usually find that out the hard way, seem it's the only way I can learn a lesson. loved it. Nicki

AltumHunksUnite 53M

6/22/2005 8:21 am

Welcome to blogland, knight. Keep up the good work.

Let me drive. I like the view

cum4me68plus1 53M

6/23/2005 5:03 pm

very deep.

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