Poem for Her  

aascrompn 42M
6957 posts
3/18/2006 3:46 pm

Last Read:
10/13/2012 1:39 am

Poem for Her

I daydream of only you
To feel and touch you
To find you within
The inner depths of my soul

I daydream of what could’ve
Had we only met
Had we lived closer
Had you been available

Say that you would’ve, had you
Only had the chance
Would you have given
Me, the one and only dance…

…that matters?

~ © M ~ 18Mar06

bardicman 50M

3/18/2006 4:50 pm

Live and Dream...

Do not overthing.

I am not dead yet

bardicman 50M

3/18/2006 5:39 pm

over think either

I am not dead yet

rm_goddess1946 106F
13518 posts
3/18/2006 6:49 pm

You gotta have a dream...
or how you gonna make a dream come true?

That's the song that's playing in my head right
about now. Everything starts in your mind......

Hugs to you for a wonderful weekend, Aas...

Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...

MaggiesWishes 60F

3/18/2006 10:51 pm

Dang ... aas ...

Why can't I get a man to say those things to me? ::stomp dirt::

Reminds me of the song, The Dance by Garth Brooks, such a nice song.

I'm sure she will accept your invite for the dance.


Holly_Would 106F

3/19/2006 1:38 am

And you say you are not a poet? You are in your heart, which is where it counts; and that shows in your writing.

TabithaElectra79 38F

3/19/2006 5:22 am

I totally agree with Holly, your poems really do seem to come from your heart, your true feelings and that is what makes them beautiful...

Seriously_Real 48M

3/19/2006 9:54 am

That was your best poem yet. Don't stop.


kelly402005 52F

3/19/2006 1:06 pm

Nice one,
keep going......

Can I dance for you?

rm_emmie234 52F
608 posts
3/20/2006 6:25 am

Very nice.

TheRealThing655 48F
9558 posts
3/20/2006 5:20 pm

Beautiful...wish someone would write that about me.

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