My responce  

aascrompn 42M
6957 posts
3/19/2006 10:40 am

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10/18/2006 6:27 am

My responce


What if I wanted to
hover right there beside you
Regardless of your darkened thoughts
You have already hurt me
So you see
there is nothing else but me
wanting and dreaming of what might've been

jadedbabe78 105F

3/19/2006 10:52 am



*Hugs*


TabithaElectra79 37F

3/19/2006 11:28 am

You know my thoughts on this...


Kaliedascope61 41M
4084 posts
3/19/2006 12:19 pm

this reminded me of a song by death cab for cutie, called the sound of settling, has a line in there
I sit and wonder
of all the loves that could have been
if I only though of something
charming to say.

I don't know you were writing about, but thats what it remind me of.


papyrina 50F
21133 posts
3/19/2006 12:23 pm

dreams are sometimes all we have


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


kelly402005 52F

3/19/2006 1:11 pm

    Quoting Kaliedascope61:
    this reminded me of a song by death cab for cutie, called the sound of settling, has a line in there
    I sit and wonder
    of all the loves that could have been
    if I only though of something
    charming to say.

    I don't know you were writing about, but thats what it remind me of.
I don't know where you are going with this either......
Kaliedascope thinks of a song!

I just think,
why do you want to put yourself in the position to be hurt again?

~~~ I'm hugging you man~~~


bardicman 50M

3/19/2006 1:55 pm

I think we will be ok honey



I am not dead yet


LustyTaurus 48M  
21253 posts
3/19/2006 6:10 pm

well...hmmm...interesting....yes, I see...maybe...

Sorry man, I got nothin'...good luck with what's on your mind.

lustytaurus


rm_bucfannn 61M/60F
2110 posts
3/19/2006 9:37 pm

*hugs*

I've been where you are, and I know it hurts....

Cat


angelofmercy5 58F
17881 posts
3/19/2006 9:43 pm

Sending you ~hugs~! And understand this one perfectly!


jktagirl69 40F
79 posts
3/19/2006 11:29 pm

hhhuuumm, could only give u hug!


rm_emmie234 52F
608 posts
3/20/2006 6:29 am

Good luck, and do't stop looking.
The one for you will one day suddenly appear.
~E~


clevergirl4U 58F

3/20/2006 6:56 am

I had a very passionate 3 year affair with a man "across the pond" when I was your age, and before I married. I have a box of his love letters and photos sealed up in the attic, to shock the grandkids with one day

Only reason I'm telling you this is because he and I shared a really big, passionate love, but even THAT didn't work out because of the difference in culture. He is a Brit, who in the end loves everything British. He liked visiting the States, but didn't want to live here. The same was true for me...I loved touring and visiting Britain, but was miserable when I tried to make it home. So even IF this woman from "across the pond" had taken off and become more, cross-culture relationships are doubly tough, and love doesn't always conquer all.

But, hey, she inspired you to write better poetry...no small thing


MoutnainGirl 37F

3/20/2006 9:50 am

Best thing I a say is give it some time. Time seems to healall words as fucking cliche as that is..

Moutnain Girl

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seek_u_topia 50M

3/20/2006 2:26 pm

I certainly don't know the history or background on this, but reflecting on the "might have beens" is always valuable to a point. Not that I'm any sort of sage, but try to learn and move on. Also, I very much feel your anguish from this poem...very nicely written.


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