You are mine  

_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F
6527 posts
2/8/2006 12:13 am

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5/10/2006 1:13 am

You are mine

This post is something I wrote for a very special and dear friend. Gaijin tesoro, this one is for you and only you....

I sat there alone...
Foot traffic on the street was light; it had rained. Pavement smelled of city puddle. I stretched my feet out, watching the water roll down from the boot toe. Trying to look nonchalant, I could feel my heart skipping...beat, skip...beat, skip. Unknown Woman Found Dead of Heart Failure in CnC's Cafe....beat, skip.
Inside, the late lunch crowd grew bored, shifted their feet while groping for umbrellas, looking for the way out. They slipped onto the sidewalk, as if the school bell had rung and it was time to go.
I felt embarrassed.
Glancing over the tops of buildings, I could see the dark clouds rushing in a way that made me dizzy. I got up, stiff in my joints, and self consciously walked into the cafe.

At the edges of the dark room, people lingered in pairs over coffee and Danish pastries. Laughter startled me as I made my way to the table closest to the door. I sat facing the street.
My God! Am I going to be stood up? My stomach lurched...beat, skip.
I shrugged off my raincoat. The waitress, a beautiful long haired girl, with matching legs, on her break, eyed me resentfully. Just as she was about to get up from her chair, the door to the Cafe opened and He walked in.
This amazing man possesed a tall, lean body, wearing his hazel eyes which now flashed amazingly blue.
He sat down at the table with me and held out his hand. "Great to finally meet you," crookedly grinning....the smile that was all mine. In that moment I knew I was right from the very first start.
He really was mine.....and mine alone.

At first, I tried to ignore it. But over the days and weeks following my revelation, I slowly began to surrender. I know you, I know you, I felt in every fiber of flesh. His photograph at first sent shivers through my body. Finally, I couldn't bear to look at his face. I stopped sleeping. I force fed myself. I walked hours a day, enshrouded in a mist of pure agony. And then, I began to plan....

Finally we were sitting in the Cafe. I loved him with a desperation that was palpable, a physical ache at the borderline of orgasm, a thirst that could never be quenched. My mind stepped aside. My soul, hand in hand with whatever creature had been summoned the night of spell casting, took its place.
I had to make him truly and eternally mine.

In my waistband, biting into my flesh, the holster was moist from the heat of my body. The .380 semi-automatic, fully loaded and ready to fire, was inches from my grasp. I casually reached for its pearl handle and whispered…..”lets have some coffee at my place ?”

leyndokona2 49F

2/8/2006 1:44 am

You forgot the "To be continued...".

leyndokona2 49F

2/8/2006 1:47 am

oh and you got one thing wrong up there; the papers would never refer to you as an unknown woman! Don't forget you are famous! The headlines will have your name in it and in the following days, large headlines like: "Coffee stocks down due to rapidly decreasing sales in coffee beans". But thank God you didn't have a heart attack that day and those headlines won't be in the papers any time soon.

saucy2005k 43F

2/8/2006 2:37 am

good reading....please post me your finished hooked

Erik_Bloodaxe 56M

2/8/2006 2:59 am

Blimey. And I thought you were just a humble, head-scarf wearing waitress. You are obviously a dark horse

dutchpete 54M
563 posts
2/8/2006 3:39 am

Bummer.....just changed my .380mm to a .9 semi-automatic Ruger P89

TammyDHU 45F
246 posts
2/8/2006 5:23 am

oh my exciting!!!

Lioness_girl 45F
3494 posts
2/8/2006 7:07 am

Oh my...what excitement and I can only imagine what will come next.


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oldman1776 78M
3164 posts
2/8/2006 9:29 am

Damn I like it,can't wait to see what happens next.

HBowt2 58F

2/8/2006 3:54 pm

A moist holster.....can't wait to hear what happens next...

rm_morgan1846 62M

2/8/2006 4:59 pm

Well I hope this runs and runs Episode one has great promise.

Green_Tea_Boy 49M
1064 posts
2/8/2006 5:58 pm

I was there ...I saw it in my minds eye...

rm_Aestolia 36T

2/8/2006 8:30 pm

mmm delightful shivers as I read, very nice.


2/8/2006 11:17 pm

Deeeeelicious can't wait for more!!!

just a squirrel trying to get a nut

whiskEynowater 54M
204 posts
2/9/2006 12:38 am

I hope you know that he has 4 tall dark blue eyed accomplices waiting outside ro assist him.

rm__AnyGirl_ 50F
246 posts
2/9/2006 12:45 am

Now that is not fair....he is either mine..or you share him..what's it to be ??????

leyndokona2 49F

2/9/2006 1:53 am

We are all waiting for more

freetime648 52F

2/9/2006 5:50 am

****tapping fingers on the table....looking at watch....tap tap tapping

When will this continue?????

xx FREETIME648 xx

womanoirish 53F

2/10/2006 12:23 am

Very powerful. I liked it.

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