La Hollandaise  

_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F
6527 posts
12/9/2005 1:02 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

La Hollandaise

Dip the brush in the black
spread it across her pale throat
slash her lips in coal
....a whore's shade.
a deadly necklace brushed on.
Her flesh a mass of peach tones,
a clump of black for her
curly bedroom hair.
She is sprawled before you
on an unmade bed.
Her soul catched on your canvas,
her blood on your hands ?

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Erik_Bloodaxe 56M

12/9/2005 2:40 am

Coffee....did you paint this? Your words are very intense

Green_Tea_Boy 50M
1064 posts
12/9/2005 3:40 am



_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

12/9/2005 4:23 am

I try to paint with words, Erik.

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keithcancook 60M
17718 posts
12/9/2005 7:48 am

Well, she took the chance. I hope it works out for her.

dutchpete 54M
563 posts
12/9/2005 8:43 am

She is a painter with words.
When thinking orange the colors will be black though the words express the feelings, just as a painter.

And when looking at the words we can discover different angles to look at it just as with a mixture of colors on a linnen framing which we call a painting.

Aren't they the same ?

interested13563 53M
2557 posts
12/9/2005 12:27 pm

This is very strong! Stronger than double-dark roast espresso!
Does it correspond to a real fact? I cannot help but feel for
the woman.

whiskEynowater 55M
204 posts
12/10/2005 12:28 pm

Do you see with your eyes, or your heart ?


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