Blauw  

_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F
6527 posts
3/3/2005 5:17 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Blauw

Ok....I am very pissed. You all know who, did reject one of my posts. Big brother is watching and definately needs spanking. I am sure some of my readers will love to help out on this matter of fact.... so please grab those paddles, crops...and whatever you people are using.
This posting probably wont make it as well but I am trying it again. Its absurd they reject a simple non erotic poem about a child making a snowangel.
anyways...here is goes. This is for the Dutch only.

Blauw
Is het zwaar?
Languit op haar rug
tenen richting lucht
sneeuwvlokken
op haar tong
Laarsen in verse sneeuw
vleugelgeritsel

Blauw
Hoe zwaar weegt blauw ?
Met haar armen
en voeten licht
toverend een sneeuw engel

Blauw
weegt veel dacht ze
als je telt hoeveel bomen nodig zijn
om het met hun sterke armen
boven hun hoofd te tillen

Blauw
en ze dansde door het
pastel van vandaag
ijskristallen in haar ogen

Liefs CnC


Erik_Bloodaxe 56M

3/3/2005 11:04 am

Errr......I am sure that poem was nice. But it was double dutch to me


GoddessOfTheDamn 105F
12 posts
3/3/2005 11:41 am

feeling a bit.... blue?
great poem, yet again


rm_beast1966 50M

3/3/2005 12:47 pm

dan mogen we vast ook in het NL antwoorden?
dit is een heel lief gedicht.blij te zien dat je zot ook wilt posten.

xxx Beast


rm_beast1966 50M

3/3/2005 12:48 pm

(oops... zot = zoiets)


papyrina 51F
21133 posts
3/4/2005 1:57 am

coffee that was so sad and touching
Or just double dutch,
O well another language to learn.
they stole my dic pics article,


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


DPL208 50M
240 posts
3/4/2005 7:02 am

I could use the expression "it's all greek to me" but you probably won't believe me


Jerosd 47M

3/4/2005 7:16 am

i love blue......*starts dreaming again*


Buck595 57M
28 posts
3/4/2005 9:58 am

Now lady of beautiful words, please let nothing that they do put out the fire of love that is in your heart. I did not understand your poem, but yet I understand the feelings of your heart. They sensor our writngs, but they cannot our soul.


leyndokona2 49F

3/5/2005 4:58 am

I always get so proud when I at least think I understand some Dutch. Not enaugh to understand every word but I at least pretend to understand a few. And from what I imagine I understand from this, it's beautiful as everything else my friend CNC writes.


_TeaNoMilk_ 52F

3/11/2005 10:32 am

Blue so blue
This is a very happy poem actually


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

3/12/2005 4:58 pm

Yes silly Tea....You know who my little snowangel is...


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

3/17/2005 2:28 pm

she is my sweetie


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

3/17/2005 2:28 pm

my darling


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

3/17/2005 2:28 pm

my angel


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

3/17/2005 2:29 pm

no more snow......


leyndokona2 49F

3/19/2005 3:11 am

Just a thought. How can you write something in Dutch and I can't write in Icelandic or Italian?


leyndokona2 49F

3/19/2005 3:12 am

Another thought. Do people go this far back to read blogs or are they all forgotten when a new month or a new page starts?


leyndokona2 49F

3/19/2005 3:14 am

Has anyone seen any rules about what is allowed and what is not on this AdultFriendFinder blog? I have looked and I have asked but no one seams to have the answer


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