My First Attempt at Poetry (yes, the naked, tattooed, longhair is writing poems now)  

WeaponsFighter 47M
365 posts
9/4/2006 12:52 pm

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9/19/2006 12:25 pm

My First Attempt at Poetry (yes, the naked, tattooed, longhair is writing poems now)

Walking at Night

It saunters through my soul like a subtle breeze
As the dew lifts in the morning
Showing everything
Revealing nothing

The pieces of the puzzle wander inside
Looking for their place
Showing everything
Revealing nothing

There is a new warmth I feel upon my skin
Yet, leaves a yearning through my bones
The wanderer walks peacefully
Still looking for a home

And when my spirit finds this place
A place I'll never know
I will show the peace upon my face
For the place I'll never go

The connundrum of the path I walk
Brings me one day to an end
And I shall go there happily
With you, my dearest friend

For I am One, and One is I
The both of us shall walk
And if you ask me along the way
I will gladly talk

I will tell you what you don't want to hear
And tell you what you want
Tales that show my love for you
And tales of pain and gaunt

When your time comes to part with me
You shall know me best
Of everything that makes me whole
Knowing more and knowing less

A day will come to tell this tale
Of my enigmatic life
A soul that is full of peace
Balanced by its strife

Showing everything
Revealing nothing


bustybettyboop 50F  
59325 posts
9/4/2006 2:22 pm

i love your poetry!!! ohh by the way...u r very hot looking too! *wink* hugz,busty

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WeaponsFighter replies on 9/4/2006 3:18 pm:
Flattery, my sweet, gets you everywhere. I'm honored.

JuicyBBW1001 54F

9/8/2006 6:24 am

Nice poem hope you write more. Oh and nice ass too.

Juicy


WeaponsFighter replies on 9/8/2006 5:56 pm:
I'm glad you enjoy my efforts, and my ass. I do hope I continue to suit your favor.

rm_goddess1946 105F
13518 posts
9/18/2006 7:35 pm

I really liked this one! Seriously, you need
to get that writing pen out more often!


Just a little food for thought.............
If you really want to be happy, nobody can stop you...
{=}


WeaponsFighter replies on 9/18/2006 9:37 pm:
I will do my best to indulge your tastes. Thank you for your kindness.

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