My Galadriel  

WKress 48M
127 posts
8/29/2006 1:58 am

Last Read:
1/26/2007 1:07 am

My Galadriel

The darkened lights catch the twinkle
Of dawning crystals in her eyes
Beautiful gems that shine and sparkle
Can she hear my lonely cries.
Sweet to smell, soft and long
Like gentle wings her hair is set
As fine as any Elven song
My memory holds the night we met.
I see flowers when I look at her
A wreath of colours on her head
My sight becomes a hazy blur
A crown of white, blue, green, and red.
Curious to know so much
My Galadriel, my Elven Queen
My heart melts with her warm touch
From my darkness all is seen.
Taking a chance in growing night
To watch her lightly move and dance
Clouding my eyes with her soft light
My warm feelings of tender romance.
I know not how she feels for me
I can only wish she feels the same
So one day the seed will become a tree
As I quietly call her lovely name.

ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/29/2006 2:39 am

*smiles*...wonderful warm imagery....thank you

WKress 48M

9/1/2006 4:32 pm

*smilez back* Thankee sai SoftWhisper!!

Whitetrash1967 49F

9/3/2006 7:05 am

thank you wkress- makes me think of untouched love

rm_Mmms1970 46F

9/20/2006 1:22 am

Almost made me cry,to feel ones luv like that would be a dream..ty baby.

WKress 48M

9/28/2006 7:19 pm

Thank you to both of you!! *kisserz*

CanadianQuickie 40F

10/12/2006 8:56 pm

it would be so nice for a man to feel these thought of me,you make me dream in this one or wish i could have the words you write.. ty wkress this makes you feel all the love and crave for it.ty

rm_ABCeeingU 38F

1/25/2007 8:37 pm

sighs,not sure on liking this one wkress ,sorry -your dreaming of a fantasy or something not real.ive read it several times and still just not getting it or feeling nothing.gosh im sorry,no offense-it only me saying this.hugggggggssssss

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