trying something new and interesting-  

Venus107 48F
250 posts
3/16/2005 10:37 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

trying something new and interesting-


I have recently tried my hand at writing some erotica and while I find it somewhat entertaining I am only having fun with it and would apreciate any input that you guys would like to give. I do not claim to be a great writer just having fun with allowing my imagination to wonder. Thanks guys-

rm_deepender100 77M
1 post
3/19/2005 8:21 am

Beautiful Lady... your writing is good. In allowing erotic thoughts to be captured in print, sometimes we use repetitious terms and phrases far too often. Allow the deep sensuality that you possess to express itself through suggestion.
"If I were looking deeply into your beautiful eyes, I might imagine their mirroring the growing impulses that are beginning within you. The dark pupils widen...the warmth becomes heat. I imagine that the same pink flush that has appeared on your cheeks is causing the fullness and moistening to begin. Gentle sensations stir inside you... those that can grow to waves that wash over you. Drown you. They plunge you into the cauldron that allows you to become the most treasured of earthly beings... Woman." Please continue your enjoyment with erotica. You will discover even more about yourself through that activity. Hungryman


rm_Mustang20593 53M

3/24/2005 3:00 am

And sometimes, Hungryman, we get so wrapped up in euphamisms and metaphores we loose sight of the subject matter. We're describing sex here, not writing poetry or entering a spelling bee!


SuthnSatisfier 37M

5/21/2005 6:24 am

Your writing is delicious, You are delicious. Whew.... =c]K


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