To See the Sun ...  

TheQuietGuy2005 54M
3484 posts
9/23/2005 2:41 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

To See the Sun ...

In darkness entombed
I close my eyes to seek the inner light,
Now barely a flicker in the depths
So near extinguished.
But hear the cry of fear
That seeks to take its place;
Clamp jaws together hard -
Resist the urge to scream
And cry for peace.
And seek the solace
Anywhere I can:
In sleep, in dreams
Much brighter than the world.
But still I wake
To darkness unrelieved;
Put on that joyful face
And feel my way
And only pray
To unnamed gods
To see the sun again
One day.


PrincessKarma 43F
6188 posts
9/23/2005 11:26 pm

***hugs you***

The Big Bang was the mother of all orgasms.PrincessKarma

rm_EE407 41F
3903 posts
9/24/2005 12:53 am

*** takes Q's hand ***

TheQuietGuy2005 54M
2386 posts
9/24/2005 3:17 am

Thanks to both of you ... what more can I say?

AlbertPrince 57M

9/24/2005 4:16 am

You should have taken a torch

__Huntress__ 55M/57F

9/24/2005 9:45 am

Stunning ... and well-done !

TheQuietGuy2005 54M
2386 posts
9/25/2005 3:15 am

Al ... oh, I had the torch ... but I should have used Duracell

Georgia! What a stunning piece of verse and so appropriate. I don't recognise it; is it one of your own? Either way many, many thanks

Huntress ... and thank you for your kind words too.

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