Broken??  

TexasMar 43F
563 posts
10/25/2005 6:24 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Broken??

I ask myself,
Why is love so painful?
When your in love,
You feel happy and fresh.
Once it's over there's nothing left.

You see that person day in and day out.
You don't know what to say,
So you stand there,
Till one of you walks away.

When you try and make things better,
It only makes things worse.
So I ask myself,
Why is love so painful?

When you fall in love,
You think it will last.
Your together for awhile.
You always have a blast.
But it never last.

So I ask myself,
Why is love so painful?
When your in love,
You feel happy and fresh.
Once it's over there's nothing left.


sadeyes431961 55F

10/25/2005 10:19 pm

Very nice poem, I think i know how you feel, sounds like you have a broken heart, it is very painful, but with good friends and time to think you will get over it. It will take awhile, but keep writing what you feel, it will help you get over how your feeling. Good luck.


engco17 51
1 post
11/4/2005 8:28 pm

Wow Marcie , we have known eachother for a few years now , we both been thru some rough times but you sure do have a great point with that poem


TexasMar 43F

11/5/2005 9:56 am

Thanks, I have more poems....I can show them to you if you would like...


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