Tassle_Burrfoot 43M  
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2/2/2006 2:43 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


I have had this erotic story dancing around in my head for the past few days. I have the middle rolling fine, but I can not get it started quite the way I want it to.

There are two ways that I have thought of starting this thing. The first one is to try and give the subject of the story a bit of security. Pass on the knowledge that she is safe, but not in charge of how things are handled.

The second beginning is to just start the story. Put the reader into the story and let them get off. I really like the second beginning, but my problem with that is the way it so scary to the subject.

I want the story to be erotic and not scary. I am going to think about it for another day or so. Maybe put both beginnings up, maybe about two paragraphes of each. Let me think about it, lol.

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