BLOG ON! ***A Work In Progress  

TTigerAtty 62M
3769 posts
5/8/2006 8:45 am

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5/9/2006 1:46 pm

BLOG ON! ***A Work In Progress

Thirty-five chapters of my book of fiction, "BLOG ON!", are now complete. Again, thanks to all of you for your encouragement and for some wonderful feedback to make the story better.

Here's a listing of all the chapters completed so far just in case you want to link back and read the whole thing.

BLOG ON! *** Facts
BLOG ON! *** Prologue
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 1
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 2
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 3
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 4
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 5
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 6
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 7
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 8
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 9
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 10
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 11
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 12
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 13
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 14
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 15
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 16
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 17
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 18
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 19
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 20
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 21
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 22
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 23
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 24
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 25
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 26
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 27
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 28
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 29
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 30
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 31
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 32
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 33
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 34
BLOG ON! *** Chapter 35

Input received so far has been really helpful. Please keep it coming! Here's what I have so far:

1. Cut out a lot of the song lyrics in Chapter 13 (scene in Dick Steele's office). Too distracting from the storyline. Input provided by want2play926.
2. Don't repeat background information quite so much as the story moves from chapter to chapter. Input provided by want2play926.
3. San Francisco Bay Area technical corrections. Input provided by newaroundhere64.
4. UCLA Bruins should defeat the Florida Gators. Who else but [blog magnet4u22]!
5. Various technical corrections, e.g. spelling, grammar, reference to wrong name, etc. Input provided by SweetDarlinAngel
6. General encouragement to continue has been provided by: AmberSolaire, bardicman, BlondieInOz, GardenGnome2006, [blog goddess1946], jaynbuck, katsback, keithcancook, [blog magnet4u22], micahbiguns, Michael_IG65, MOfunNOWWOW, [blog mzhunyhole], newaroundhere64, ohsodelicious, papyrina, phoenix_law, PrincessKarma, [blog saintlianna], scarlettsflame, SensuallyKatey, ShayeDK, Sorceror07, sparkee58, SweetDarlinAngel, tillerbabe, TravelinsAuntPat, TripleHARD3, want2play926, WillowWhispers2U, Whispersoftly5, and[blog 69bitemeplease69].

I hope you know how much I really do appreciate your support, your encouragement and your help in identifying areas for improvement!

Well, back to work!

Disclaimer: Any similarities between the fictional characters, businesses and locations appearing in this story and actual real people, businesses and locations is purely coincidental and are not purposely intended by the author.

Copyright © May, 2006 by TTigerAtty


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MOfunNOWWOW 55F

5/8/2006 10:55 am

That freaking bites (not that you have to worry about anything to bite) but have you called and aske them where your money is? {=}


MOMO
just a squirrel trying to get a nut


papyrina 51F
21133 posts
5/8/2006 11:03 am

all this must be hard work for you


I'm a

and
i'm here to stay


TTigerAtty 62M

5/8/2006 11:22 am

    Quoting papyrina:
    all this must be hard work for you
Papy, I have a staff of 5 "blog assistants" helping me!


ohsodelicious 57F
1922 posts
5/8/2006 6:32 pm

Tig{=} It looks as though I missed a whole lot of 'chapters'...I blame 'it' on the vines...I take the 5th...Sorry...I haven't been around much...but M'nature waits for 'no one'...I have to take the time 'now' to reap the rewards...I'll catch-up...eventually!!

Hugs...OhSo{=}


TTigerAtty 62M

5/8/2006 9:26 pm

    Quoting ohsodelicious:
    Tig{=} It looks as though I missed a whole lot of 'chapters'...I blame 'it' on the vines...I take the 5th...Sorry...I haven't been around much...but M'nature waits for 'no one'...I have to take the time 'now' to reap the rewards...I'll catch-up...eventually!!

    Hugs...OhSo{=}
I understand, OhSo! Don't work to hard!


TTigerAtty 62M

5/9/2006 4:41 am

    Quoting rm_mzhunyhole:
    I'm reading..and reading..and reading..and reading..lordy!!!
I need to wrap this story up and go fishin', MzHuny!


TTigerAtty 62M

5/9/2006 4:43 am

    Quoting MOfunNOWWOW:
    That freaking bites (not that you have to worry about anything to bite) but have you called and aske them where your money is? {=}
Money for what, MO?


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