It's Raining Outside  

SunneyOne 44F
2146 posts
10/6/2005 10:12 am

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It's Raining Outside

It痴 raining outside, and somewhat dark. I知 thinking of you, and my thoughts are like the rain. They fall in weighted drops pulled down by a force so natural, connected sometimes to others, and sometimes, so very random. They are fluid thoughts, some actual, some imagined. Some are memories and others are fantasy. So while this isn稚 the most well-written entry, or the most cohesive, it makes sense to me. It may leave more questions than answers, it may be vague and raw. It may not make sense, but sometimes, neither does the rain.

I am thinking of being in bed with you while it rains, of listening to it outside the window, of how it muffles the soft noises we make. It sounds like whispers, like laughter, and it reminds me of being tickled, of squirming away when I really want your hands on me.

The varying textures of your skin, the curves and planes and hollow spots, soft and hard. My fingertips memorize them. The weight of you over me. The lazy dip of your eyelashes as you blink. Flashes of sensation that hold on, a picture that is only shown a moment but leaves its impression for longer. Wine that is swallowed, but leaves its taste on your tongue. Tangled limbs. The sound of my breath when you take it. Slow and sensual melting of lips to tongues. The taste of rain drops.

I知 thinking of long, meandering conversations and silences and thoughts. I知 thinking of things to tell you, that you would think were funny or interesting, questions to ask you, your opinions and ideas. Whispers and moans. Steps, smarter than me. I知 imagining where and when, and then, and now.

toothysmile 50M
16515 posts
10/6/2005 4:21 pm

It 's raining outside, it 's sunney inside...

justforfun13134 46M

10/6/2005 9:33 pm

its intresting how the imagination works, able to take the here and know and relate it to the past, present and the future all in one tiny moment. Then the moment is taken and put out for all to see. What a beautiful thing to be able to share those tiny moments. The live in them and see what you see, to feel what you feel.

a_poetman 45M

10/7/2005 12:40 am

you write like you've been "reached". has someone sunk a hook in your heart? not to put you on the spot.

SunneyOne 44F

10/7/2005 4:28 am

Poet - Not to put me on the spot, hm? That's pretty on the spot. We'll see, we'll see. For now.. that's all you get.

justforfun - I'm so glad that you get that and don't find it odd that I mix the fantasy, the hopes for times that haven't happened yet, with what has actually happened. I was going to say more... but, mostly, I'm just glad you get it. It makes me nod. *giggle*

AltumHunksUnite 53M

10/7/2005 6:49 am

It's amazing how the image of rain can be used to convey feelings of both sadness AND desire.

Let me drive. I like the view

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