Haiku with the crickets  

SunneyOne 44F
2146 posts
7/11/2005 8:23 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Haiku with the crickets


I drink martini
while lounging on couch tonight
wearing only thong.

Somewhere lurks cricket
chirping constantly at me
I can't block it out

Must find damn cricket
stop these incessant noises
making ear drums bleed.

Cricket taunts Sunney
hiding under couch and chair
just out of my sight.

Martini goes down
olives bounce on my table
Belvedere wasted.

All is sadness now
I have lost my martini
Vengeance will be mine.

Look out damn cricket
You were going to be spared
Now I will kill you.

Battle does ensue.
War is waged with cricket.
I am the victor.

But I am grieving.
Alas, no more martini
I will make one more.

AltumHunksUnite 53M

7/12/2005 3:54 am

Excellent.

Let me drive. I like the view


SunneyOne 44F

7/12/2005 10:31 am

I love martinis
drink with lots of olive juice
makes me act silly.

Not sure what is up with my haiku kick. I'm amused by it though.


rm_MisterFrumpy 46M
428 posts
7/13/2005 9:18 am

lol normally i skip poems and such but that was pretty good


rm_sharksnsails 46M
738 posts
2/3/2006 5:24 pm

POOR CRICKET!!!! AHHHH

hmmmm
great haiku, don't kill crickets.

sharks


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