A Tearful Goodbye...  

(Juan S)
3683 posts
8/29/2005 4:24 am

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A Tearful Goodbye...

Can't sleep...Tonight the King size, seems a mile wide.
Images keep flashing through my mind of the last time
we made love.
Little did I realize that this would be goodbye...
Tenderly, I wiped a tear from each of your eyes.
Jokingly, I told you, "I'm going to save this one", as I
took the last one away.
You wouldn't tell me, the problem.
Instead you reached up to touch my face.
"You need to shave", you said. Smiled and planted a kiss
on my lips.
MMMmmm...critiscm or corrections from you, always were
sweet. Always were done in a way that made me feel like
rushing to please you, made me feel like you were looking out
for my best. How did you learn to be so caring?
Your arms circled my neck.
Hunger now revealing itself in your kiss.
Your body, now pressing urgently into mine.
mmmm, How I loved kissing you. Tasting you.
I pulled you closer into my arms, as I began to explore your body.
My lips traveled the gentle arc of your neck, onto your shoulders, then lower to your hardened brown nipple.
A gasp escaped your throat, as you pulled my head deeper
into your chest.
My hands, traveled down your smooth body, caressing your hips...your thighs.
I adjusted my body to lower myself...and drew the words
"I Love You" across your stomach with my tongue.
My hands reached up to cup and massage your breast, as I continued to kiss your stomach...your panty line...left thigh...
warmly brushing my lips and exhaling directly over your clit
as I slid to kiss your right thigh.
mmmm, you breathed and shifted your body...
The tingling between your legs, taking on a life of its own,
the wetness and desire revealing the urgency in your body
to be satisfied...
You shivered as I ran my tongue up the inner muscle of your thigh, and exhaled loudly as I buried my face in your essence.
There was certainly no rush tonight.
Tasting your hot juices, exploring the tender flesh outside of your opening, then sliding my tongue flatly as deep inside of you as it would go.
mmmm, your taste exciting me. The heat from your body, the desire peaking, your legs opening and closing around my head
as I drew your clit between my lips and purposefully began to
manipulate it with my tongue. Slowly, savoring each moan...each gasp...each gentle, but determined pull of my head closer to you...the warmth of your thighs on my cheeks...the heel of your foot brushing down my back to the top of my ass...
You began gripping the sheets and bed covers, your knuckles
tightening around the wadded material, as your breathing came in short animated gasps...
My tongue, determined, flickering against your pussy, as my thumb massaged, then plunged into your opening...
alternating its penetration with the finger I inserted in your butt.
A thin wall of flesh separating the two fingers. I could feel the tips of my fingers touch. As your orgasm began to intensify, signaling its approach, I began to work my fingers and tongue in
tandem. A partnership to bring you all the pleasure I could.
Your legs suddenly loosened and your feet hit the mattress, pushing your body upwards and into me. The Muscles in your legs and thighs then tightening as your orgasms delivered.
I held your body tightly against me as your orgasm subsided, then gently moved on top of your body. My Thick shaft easily sinking into your wetness. The sheets already soaked.
Your moans and hot breath in my ear and on my neck, exciting me further as I began to move with purpose. A steady rhythym, neither slow, nor fast, but delivering sensations to your body inch...by...inch. The angle causing me to stimulate your button on each stroke...In...then out.
Your arms locked around my shoulders, your ankles around my lower back...
I continued to drive into you and as our passion intensified, I began to whisper gently into your ear...
"I Love you"...
"I Love you"...
"I Love you"... breathing heavily, repetitively whispering as
I began to feel your pussy contract around my cock, seemingly on each stroke. Your teeth gritted as the pleasure overtook your body. Slipping into one orgasm after the other.
Giving into my own passion as I began to stroke Harder... deeper...
I exploded...A cry escaped your lips and you squeezed me harder than you have ever squeezed in your life...
I looked for you after that night...
My phone calls were not returned...
my searches unfruitful...
Only a chance meeting with your sister, revealed that
you left for the Army that next day.
A single letter apologizing for not confiding in me, your plans...
Too ashamed and remorseful of your decision, to tell me what you had done...
Too ashamed of what you did...to us...

Synn74 42F
1206 posts
8/29/2005 5:13 am

beautifully erotic it captured my breath Sizzle thx for sharing..

I welcome you to the House of Syn...

xx_44DD_xx 51F

8/29/2005 5:51 am

What an amazing story. I'm so sorry she left

SunneyOne 44F

8/29/2005 6:42 am

Siz - Heartbreaking, beautiful, erotic. You effectively turn 'fucking' into 'making love' and retain the eroticism, sensuality and HOTness of it. Well done...

Favorite part - "and drew the words
"I Love You" across your stomach with my tongue."


Theflinkychick 105F

8/29/2005 6:47 am

So sweet, so hot, so sad... man, I'm sorry she didn't stay...

Not all who wander are lost.

rm_summer765 52F
123 posts
8/29/2005 7:26 am

Baby,I seriously think ur in the wrong profession.playin..lol.Your just brilliant.I know..spikin up that ego.You know that u r.Just when i think it can't get any better u blow me away w/ something greater..

redswallow777 48M
6810 posts
8/29/2005 9:33 am

Nice writing siz....I must get back here more often.

wetnwildaquarius 44F

8/29/2005 9:39 am

You know what siz. Too bad for her and lucky for the rest of us. I'm tired of these think they are too good women on here playing games with sweethearts like you. She's not worth your energy or your time. Like I said before, " get with a real woman who is ready to step up to the plate and not play with your mind. You deserve better than her anyway. You need someone who is ready. This chick isn't. I love you baby. You are the greatest.

rm_summer765 52F
123 posts
8/29/2005 1:09 pm

BTW Baby...u will find the right ONE.

papyrina 51F
21133 posts
8/29/2005 1:39 pm

sorry hun,hugs and thankyou for sharing

I'm a

i'm here to stay

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 3:43 pm

Synn74, Finelady4 and Redswallow- Welcome to the wonderful world of Sizzle.
Glad you cold come by and hang out with us and hope you come back soon and often.
Thanks for your comments and glad that you enjoyed...

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 3:47 pm

xx_44DD - This relationship was the first one after my separation, so it was a few years ago. I have no idea why this crossed my mind last night, but, hey...maybe she was remembering it too at that exact same time...mmm, That's a hot idea! LOL

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 3:49 pm

Sunneyone- I try to switch things up and keep em guessing when I can. When I woman thinks we're going to fuck, I make love to them and vice-versa. Seems to be the factor that keeps me on good terms with all of my exes, except one...

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 3:53 pm

Flinkychick, Papyrina...Thanks...It was many moons ago. Guess my brain was just conjuring up the Hot sex, I ain't getting right now...LOL

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 3:57 pm

Hey summer baby...Blow you huh? LOL

Wet- sometimes you are really just so wild...LOL Thanks for being my friend!

Humboldthonni- Yes, this is much cheaper than those weekly Therapist bills...LOL

rm_beaujelais 59F

8/29/2005 6:07 pm

That was great! I enjoyed it a lot. I guess if she hadn't left then there would be no beautifully written story?

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 6:54 pm

Thanks MzHuny

On the contrary Beajelais, maybe not on this blog, but I would be writing about the magic we created in our lives, somewhere...

pussnboots694 73M/78F

8/29/2005 7:48 pm

Absolutely breathtaking..
I can almost feel your tongue..
hear your soft whispers..

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/29/2005 10:53 pm

mmmm...my spirit crossing continents again Puss...
Where have you been darling?

islandgirl_702 54F

8/30/2005 12:17 am

Boo~ I must say....to her....hmmm!...."THANKS, YOUR LOST MY GAIN!" She did not know back then what a true romantic you are...something missing in a lot of men (and some women)...I know this was a few years ago, but sometimes we go through life wondering "What if?" At this point though....I will make it all better...don't forget my flight information. =)

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/30/2005 9:37 am

LOL...IG, you're so cute...

impish_pixie 54F
6867 posts
8/30/2005 6:57 pm

siz hun...have you sent anything to a publisher? WHY NOT? I agree with "sunneyone", those words are too beautiful for paper.

I make mistakes, I am out of control & at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best. ~Marilyn

(Juan S)
2642 posts
8/31/2005 7:43 am

At this stage of the game...I am my own publisher. I wish to re-establish my multi-media company independently, however for the right check...LOL

As to the words too beautiful for paper, not only does that give me inspiration to write something new, but your stomach could be my next canvas...mmm

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
9/1/2005 10:59 am

~ handing u sum spare tissuez ~

another very gud one ....

(Juan S)
2642 posts
9/1/2005 12:54 pm

Thanks Goddess How have you been?

impish_pixie 54F
6867 posts
9/1/2005 6:26 pm

mmmm indeed.

I make mistakes, I am out of control & at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best. ~Marilyn

(Juan S)
2642 posts
9/2/2005 10:57 am

Picturing the possibilities...Pixie?

someonelikeithot 50F

9/5/2005 11:02 am

Beautifully written. Touching, romantic and ..so real! Made my mind wonder into the past reliving some magical feelings... and..heartbreaks!
Wonderful! I think I will be back to follow your blogs, now that I have discovered them!

(Juan S)
2642 posts
9/5/2005 10:57 pm

Thanks someonelikeithot and welcome to Sizzle's world. You are most welcome to come and hang with us as often as you like. This particular story IS real as are most of my writings. I have been kind of downloading a lot of memories and thoughts, in trying to...I guess realize more of who I am and what I am looking for... Hope to see you soon.

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