Tainted  

ShyWhisper2006 53F
8597 posts
6/28/2006 5:04 am
Tainted

Pressure builds from all sides
unrelenting it takes hold and
shakes her like a forgotten child's toy
everything blurred
show her the way
guide her make her feel safe
surround her so the fall will be brief
comfort the weeping within
tear strips to stop up the flow
to rescue the shred
of salvageable soul that is left
nurture the little bit of life thats left
turn away it is lost ...like countless others...
thrown back to the confusion
the chaos
pulsating
churning
yearning to be free
wall up shut down
turn out the light when you leave
look past the ember that still struggles to glow
still aches to ignite
being smothered by indifference
and falsehoods
succumb to the spiral
release to the unknown
obliterate the festering limb that poisons
the beauty
the innocence
the quiet soul
unyielding to all but love
and comfort
degradation covers with a shell once more
stroke
soothe
nurture the sweetness of passion
that oozes from every pore and portal
bloodshot
cum shot
nether regions
soak up the goodness that spills from
the parted lips
unheeded
unbound
and
free


(c) ShyWhisper2006


Jonny2polite 30M
6 posts
6/29/2006 8:22 pm

Ooo, you were always good at poetry. I like

Did you get that little present I sent you awhile back? Take Care


rm_moonboy23 36M
893 posts
7/3/2006 9:57 am

very interesting poem shywhisper
use of words are very good and strong and like the flow as well


Goldenhairgodess 63F
396 posts
7/4/2006 9:14 am

Hi Shy;
I am in awe of the complexities and depths of your poetry. I wonder how you came to be the unique person that you are. How does a person develop their creative abstract talents? Fantasy is hard for me to grasp-let alone express. Maybe by reading your blog some of that talent may be tapped into.


SirMounts 102M

7/8/2006 1:14 am

My, you have really outdone yourself here, shy. Very, very good. *smiling warmly*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/8/2006 2:01 am

    Quoting Jonny2polite:
    Ooo, you were always good at poetry. I like

    Did you get that little present I sent you awhile back? Take Care
Thank you Jonny2polite...such a nice visit...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/8/2006 2:03 am

    Quoting rm_moonboy23:
    very interesting poem shywhisper
    use of words are very good and strong and like the flow as well
Why thank you so much moonboy23...I appreciate your feedback *smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/8/2006 2:06 am

    Quoting Goldenhairgodess:
    Hi Shy;
    I am in awe of the complexities and depths of your poetry. I wonder how you came to be the unique person that you are. How does a person develop their creative abstract talents? Fantasy is hard for me to grasp-let alone express. Maybe by reading your blog some of that talent may be tapped into.

Awww...Golden dear...Thank you so much for your beautiful comment...*blushes*...I think my thoughts come from inside where even I have limited entry at times...that and insomnia mixed with caffiene...*giggles*...thank you for stopping by Golden


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/8/2006 2:07 am

    Quoting SirMounts:
    My, you have really outdone yourself here, shy. Very, very good. *smiling warmly*
*bows shly* ...Thank you SirMounts...your comments are always welcome...I am glad you liked it...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/8/2006 2:09 am

    Quoting SirMounts:
    My, you have really outdone yourself here, shy. Very, very good. *smiling warmly*
*bows shyly* ...Thank you SirMounts...your comments are always welcome...I am glad you liked it...*smiles*


_King_Cobb_ 54M
25396 posts
1/3/2008 1:15 am

So I'm back again to seeking a "secret meeting place" for us.

I do like these sledom looked at posts.

This one reminds me that I should flex my poetry muscle some time soon. Something I haven't yet do in my new incarnation.

I think my them will be something like ....

"apparent bleakness and suspicion balanced by hope and faith"

or something along those lines.

With a good dose of absolutely absurd humor of course!


insert exploding bomb image here


ShyWhisper2006 replies on 1/3/2008 2:11 am:
Welcome back to my blog..interesting new handle..yes well seldom looked at because not many followed me or knew me back then ..I am glad that it helped remind you of writing..not what I was going for when I wrote it but..different take on it to be sure.
Nice to see you again

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