Scorched  

ShyWhisper2006 53F
8597 posts
7/17/2006 3:57 am
Scorched

Licking her lips she gazes at his soul
Touch me you say...I will
Unleash the fire within...I will try
But you asked my dear and now I will fly
With your heart in my hands I exhale and smile and take in the wisps of charred remains
the heat is deadly in ordinary times
But in the divine it remains till the end of my chains
Can you grasp me...do you dare?
I leave non untouched that pry this lid open
Unleashing the fire that scorched so many and turned within...
Wings help stoke the fire that burns so bright...
ask me to stop...
beg me no more..
Tis my desire that rages unbridled about and swirls and smashes through walls
Echoing off the mountains and make the statues weep...and makes the powerful ones wail...
All for a smile
a glance
and a little romance...


(c) ShyWhisper


ZZ_Todd 59M

7/17/2006 5:00 am

WOW! It's so nice to see erotica that isn't the typical smutty stuff that the "amateurs" post to get attention. The choice of color, the way the lines lay, the mental images that the words draw... beautiful, simply beautiful.


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/18/2006 1:09 am

    Quoting ZZ_Todd:
    WOW! It's so nice to see erotica that isn't the typical smutty stuff that the "amateurs" post to get attention. The choice of color, the way the lines lay, the mental images that the words draw... beautiful, simply beautiful.
*blushes*...I thank you ZZ_Todd ...tis nice to get feedback like this...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/18/2006 1:11 am

    Quoting TakethemoneyRUN:
    "Heart in your hands"?
    "Chains"?
    "Wings"?
    "Fire"?

    Is this about vampires, magic and satan?
*grins at takethemoneyRUN*....Perhaps...but truly I am a "good" girl....*giggles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/18/2006 1:12 am

Ohh DustyWidget...all of the above...or none at all....*smiles mischievously*


fortunaswm 61M/52F

7/18/2006 1:15 pm

Very nice - I enjoyed the current post as well as past posts. Your writing obviously comes from deep inside.

Thank you for your visit, fort


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/18/2006 2:14 pm

    Quoting fortunaswm:
    Very nice - I enjoyed the current post as well as past posts. Your writing obviously comes from deep inside.

    Thank you for your visit, fort
*smiles* Thank you fortunaswm...it is wonderful having such warm responses to my my blog...and you are quite observant as to where the writing comes from..thank you for visiting me...*smiles*


SirMounts 102M

7/23/2006 4:19 pm

shy...
A truly remarkable and erotic piece.
Thank you for that, shy. *smiling*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/23/2006 7:42 pm

    Quoting SirMounts:
    shy...
    A truly remarkable and erotic piece.
    Thank you for that, shy. *smiling*
Tis amazing what a little bit of...inspiration can...do....*winks*..I am glad you liked it SirMounts


SirMounts 102M

7/24/2006 1:43 am

shy...
Well, may you be so inspired, quite often. *wink*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
7/24/2006 2:47 am

i hope to be as well SirMounts...*giggles*


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