Need a Ride? ...finale *winks*  

ShyWhisper2006 53F
8597 posts
8/17/2006 5:28 pm
Need a Ride? ...finale *winks*

{the writer takes no responsibilities for tightening of clothing or extra showers ...brought on by this piece...you have been cautioned...enter at your own...risk *winks* }

Was it the storm raging outside or was it the awakening of the long dormant sexuality of a woman long denied? Either or both it mattered not as a flash lit up the car and I felt a shudder envelope me. He peered up at me from between my breasts, strands of dampened hair obscuring his eyes and the hunger that was filling him. I felt like prey to his desires and ...I so wanted to be taken.

His hands took hold of my face on either side and pulled me into a deep, passionate kiss. If it were possible he tasted my long forgotten and buried needs. He was determined to arouse and devour them. His touch on my body was slowly dissolving my inhibitions and stirring the embers to spark a blaze inside my very core.

Half clothed, in a wicked storm and in the embrace of a stranger.

Could I ask for anything more? Oh yes I wanted this...I needed this and I was going to get ...it.

My breathing ragged and mingled together with his murmurings and my soft moans the windows fogged over. Droplets of condensation weaved little paths down the glass, as our own sweat beaded and rolled off our bodies. Arms and legs entangled amid such a small space. No notice was taken as to the cramped quarters , nothing was focused on but the sheer need to fulfill the lust that dared to consume us.

His hand snaked its way down to my jean covered mound and as he cupped and pressed against it , my hips thrust up on their own accord. I gasped against his neck and gently bit his soft flesh between his neck and shoulder. He moaned deeply and pressed harder squeezing as if to feel the growing moisture that was awaiting him.

Sliding his hand deeper between my thighs he grabbed hold of my ass from underneath and growled against my ear,
"This is mine".
I whimpered softly as a trembling surge went through me.

His hand slid upwards back to the button of my jeans and deftly opened it and began to very slowly slide the zipper down. Tooth by tooth agonizingly slow ...it was all I could do to barely breath. Wanting to grab his hand and push it faster and wanting it to tease me more.

I could feel the warm tips of his fingers as the came near my skin and as they followed the lace around my waist I felt as though my heart had stopped. Such an exquisite feeling and yet he was not nearly done...with me. Moving me sideways in my seat he placed one of my legs, on either side of himself. Running his hands up my legs, over my thighs and then swiftly grabbing hold of my jeans and pulling them down to the tops of my thighs.

Watching his every movement , staring into his eyes which had not left mine for a moment, a look that held all the intensity of a needed fix ...a craving for lust that wanted to be satisfied.
He was as much my fix, as I was his.

Leaning over my body he did not touch me with his mouth, instead I felt only his breath and the warmth from his face. Slowly moving over my stomach and onto my exposed and shakily heaving breasts his face passed over me. I yearned for his lips ....his mouth...his tongue to touch me but he did not give that to me. Just his breath,and his hair slowly caressing my skin ...driving me wild with want. I wanted to grab him and pull him tightly against me and yet I did not want it to stop, not yet. Suddenly both his hands grabbed handfuls of my breasts and at the same time I felt his mouth n my pubic bone. His feathery light kisses and his molding of my breasts made me shudder and gasp aloud.

He snaked his tongue out to touch me then. Like an electric shock it sent a surge through my body, causing my hips to thrust upwards to meet his face and my hands to grab hold of the seat and cry out.

Like a Man denied a meal for way to long, he devoured me. His face face pressed against me, his mouth opened tasting that which he created and he was making sure not to allow a single drop be wasted.
He looked up at me as I writhed on the seat and grinned.

Before I could utter a word, a noise.... He was back licking and sucking along the moist lips that anxiously awaited his return. So eager were they that they spread like a blossoming lotus flower craving attention from the sun. His teeth nipped at the velvety folds and the little nub that screamed for his ministering. He eagerly obliged by licking in one very long and agonizingly slow lick from one end of my sex to the top and gently suckled on the point of all pleasure. I clawed at the seat as my body convulsed for him. Then I felt his finger enter me coating itself in the ever growing moisture and slide even deeper into me. Slowing probbing and soon joined by another eager finger to explore my depths. I had heard a noise but did not attribute it to anything more than either a moan or the creaking of the seat or car. A flash of light blinded me and the fingers were gone and the sudden cooling made me aware that the car door was open and he was standing outside. As I leaned up , my ankles were grabbed and pulled roughly across the seat and out in the pouring rain into his embrace.

He shut the car door, kissed me deeply and turned me, pressed me against the car and whispered in my ear,

"Ready luv?"

Before I could moan a reply I felt him, as he pressed his hardness against the small of my back. Grinding against me and sliding between the smooth crease of my ass, he was thick so smooth and very hard. He rubbed himself up and down the crease...the rain slicking down, wetting us both so that there was more than enough moisture to slide against my body.

Cupping my breasts with both hands I had no choice but to move with him as he moved me to the trunk of the car pushing against me leaning me over he pinched and pulled at my hardened nipples and moved his hips so that his velvety hardness was poised just at my heated entrance.

Lightening crashed above us and he thrust hard and fast ..taking me.
My cry was not heard with the thunder and it didn't matter. He slid one arm around just above my breasts and the other hand grabbed a handful of my now soaked hair and pulled it back sharply as he thrust, again...and again.

Wind and rain pelted us and made our bodies slick as they slammed together over and over ...getting faster and harder, as he sought to find the deepest part of my inner core. His mouth found the tender flesh between my neck and shoulder and he bite down growling and sent me over the edge. His moans were so loud and so intoxicating as I felt him tense up and slam into me even harder , bottoming out deep within and spreading the heat of his molten seed in to my heated depths. He pressed against me weakly trying to thrust the last bit of his heat into me but instead just held me tightly shuddering against my own quivering body.
Thunder rumbled above us and I felt him slowly slip out of me,.. I moaned softly.

Turning to face him I smiled and he weakly smiled back a grin. I pressed him up against the car where he had held me and I knelt before him and grabbing hold of his thighs I leaned in and slowly licked our mixture from him . Long slow licks up him and down again..tasting our combined moisture and slipped my hand around him to hold his still hard member up a little as I found the under lying sacs and took each one into my mouth , swirling my tongue around them and kissing them gently making sure he was cleaned thoroughly from our lust. Slipping his length into my mouth his hands found my hair and grabbed it and pulled me deeper onto his hardness and I took him in. He released my hair as he was spent and I kissed along the shaft and the suckled his head and kissed it softly and standing up slowly, sliding my hands up his body and kissed his chest and then up around his neck and as I neared his ear...I whispered softly...

"Still want that... ride
?"


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/17/2006 8:05 pm

    Quoting spunky11961:
    Well that was not only Very Erotic, that was very good! Good imagery in your words! I liked!
    ~spunky
spunky...Thank you so much...I am glad you enjoyed it...your comments are appreciated


rm_calgarym_43 54M

8/17/2006 9:14 pm

I would love a ride... are you offering
@}-;-'--- Darcy


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/17/2006 9:32 pm

    Quoting rm_calgarym_43:
    I would love a ride... are you offering
    @}-;-'--- Darcy
calgarym_43....*blushes*...Oh but I was told not to pick up strangers...


imaxtoy 33M
1289 posts
8/17/2006 9:38 pm

*claps* Well done, hon! That was vvvverrrryyy *in a growly voice* good. *grin*

imax, the toyed


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/17/2006 10:44 pm

    Quoting imaxtoy:
    *claps* Well done, hon! That was vvvverrrryyy *in a growly voice* good. *grin*
Imaxtoy....*blushes* Coming from you...[as i have read some of your writings]...I appreciate your compliment...*smiles*


IviesBidesJuste 55M
3658 posts
8/18/2006 12:15 am

Damn girl! ...Thought I would have to use some extra Astroglide for this one. ...\8


IviesBidesJuste 55M
3658 posts
8/18/2006 12:20 am

Damn girl! ...Thought I would have to use some extra Astroglide for this one. ...\8

I'll have to use some of my air mileage and fly to Calgary for a weekend..


IviesBidesJuste 55M
3658 posts
8/18/2006 12:22 am

By the way, How's the weather up there? Sounds like a lot more than rain getting you all wet. happyf;


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/18/2006 3:30 am

    Quoting IviesBidesJuste:
    Damn girl! ...Thought I would have to use some extra Astroglide for this one. ...\8

    I'll have to use some of my air mileage and fly to Calgary for a weekend..
LB...*blushes* what is astroglide?...
I am glad that you enjoyed it?....*giggles*
thank you for stopping by...


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/18/2006 3:33 am

    Quoting IviesBidesJuste:
    By the way, How's the weather up there? Sounds like a lot more than rain getting you all wet. happyf;
LB...The weather has been yucky...and *sighs* tis only the rain...and an overactive imagination... that is dampening anything here...*blushes*


tadpudgy 56M

8/18/2006 11:32 am

I DOOOOOOOOOOOO DECLARE! Rides have an all new meaning!!!!! *Tad needs to put ice tray down his britches* OH-MY-LAWD=GASMS!!!


SirMounts 102M

8/18/2006 12:30 pm

shy...
I always say things like, "stunning". I always say that you've outdone yourself.
Um... what more can I say? *amazed*
Thank you so very much for that, shy. *smiling warmly*


LookandWink 63M

8/18/2006 3:26 pm

Hi! I stopped in to thank you for visiting my blog and walked right into a luscious, erotic scene. Wow! I love your imagery! The flashes of lightning and the rain soaking your wet, sensuous lovers ... Mmmmm ... Sounds delightfully sweet!!! Wonderful story!!

Anyway ... Thanks again for your visit. You are welcome to visit and comment at my blog whenever you please. The door is unlocked and the welcome light on.


Sailor376 62M
2288 posts
8/18/2006 9:36 pm

Dean


florallei 99F

8/18/2006 9:46 pm

My Goodness Shy...very hot...are you sure this was not a real experience...you have a real gift of writing...very erotic...indeed...
hugs,
flo


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/18/2006 9:59 pm

    Quoting LookandWink:
    Hi! I stopped in to thank you for visiting my blog and walked right into a luscious, erotic scene. Wow! I love your imagery! The flashes of lightning and the rain soaking your wet, sensuous lovers ... Mmmmm ... Sounds delightfully sweet!!! Wonderful story!!

    Anyway ... Thanks again for your visit. You are welcome to visit and comment at my blog whenever you please. The door is unlocked and the welcome light on.
LookandWink...Welcome to my blog and you are most welcome for my visit to yours. *smiles*
Thank you for your kind comments to my little story, I appreciate them very much. I will be sure to visit yours again...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/18/2006 10:06 pm

    Quoting tadpudgy:
    I DOOOOOOOOOOOO DECLARE! Rides have an all new meaning!!!!! *Tad needs to put ice tray down his britches* OH-MY-LAWD=GASMS!!!
Tadpudgy....*giggles*...I am glad that you enjoyed it *smiles*
Now don't go catching a chill...you hear?....


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/18/2006 10:10 pm

    Quoting SirMounts:
    shy...
    I always say things like, "stunning". I always say that you've outdone yourself.
    Um... what more can I say? *amazed*
    Thank you so very much for that, shy. *smiling warmly*
SirMounts...i thank you for your appreciation and your most welcome ..I am glad that you ...enjoyed it.


rm_ShineOnU2 54M
125 posts
8/19/2006 11:53 am

O...M...G! SHY! YES I WANT A RIDE! Pretty Please! I've been good. Promise. Wow, that was truly wonderful. I half expected some fluffy "Harlequin-Like" story, but you did not disappoint me one little bit. You have earned my respect!

Thank you!


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/19/2006 7:04 pm

    Quoting florallei:
    My Goodness Shy...very hot...are you sure this was not a real experience...you have a real gift of writing...very erotic...indeed...
    hugs,
    flo
Flo...*blushes*...Purely made up in my mind...not based on any real or previous experience....I am glad you enjoyed it *hugs*
Thank you for your kindness *smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/19/2006 7:11 pm

    Quoting rm_ShineOnU2:
    O...M...G! SHY! YES I WANT A RIDE! Pretty Please! I've been good. Promise. Wow, that was truly wonderful. I half expected some fluffy "Harlequin-Like" story, but you did not disappoint me one little bit. You have earned my respect!

    Thank you!
ShineOnU2 ...Welcome to my blog and thank you so very much for your wonderful comment on my writing...I am glad you enjoyed it...
As for the "fluffy Harlequin-like"...oh there will be none of that ...*giggles*...never liked those kind of stories myself.
And you are most welcome...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 2:33 am

Sailor....*smiles* your welcome


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 2:35 am

    Quoting TakethemoneyRUN:
    I just had almost a bottle of vodka, so i couldn't read the whole stuff you wrote. But I did read the red letters you wrote. So my answer is: Yes I need a ride. Take me home please. But in my condition I might throw up on your back seat.
TakethemoneyRun....yikes ...I can see what the being sick...but if you needed a ride i would always help a friend *smiles*


ginsoakedboi 43M

8/23/2006 4:47 am

Oh my!!!!!!!

Great writing shy, so erotic - (such a nice change from pornographic which you'd expect on an adult site)


IviesBidesJuste 55M
3658 posts
8/23/2006 1:24 pm

    Quoting ShyWhisper2006:
    LB...*blushes* what is astroglide?...
    I am glad that you enjoyed it?....*giggles*
    thank you for stopping by...
Astroglide is a water based personal lubricant.
[image]


IviesBidesJuste 55M
3658 posts
8/23/2006 1:26 pm

    Quoting ShyWhisper2006:
    LB...The weather has been yucky...and *sighs* tis only the rain...and an overactive imagination... that is dampening anything here...*blushes*
Too bad, looks like you need some sunshine. We've been in the low 80's here in SoCal.


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 3:26 pm

    Quoting ginsoakedboi:
    Oh my!!!!!!!

    Great writing shy, so erotic - (such a nice change from pornographic which you'd expect on an adult site)
ginsoakedboi....welcome to my blog and thank you for such a great comment...I am glad that you enjoyed it...*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 3:28 pm

    Quoting IviesBidesJuste:
    Astroglide is a water based personal lubricant.
    [image]
oh my ...*giggles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/23/2006 3:29 pm

    Quoting IviesBidesJuste:
    Too bad, looks like you need some sunshine. We've been in the low 80's here in SoCal.
LB...I spoke too soon...now it has been very hot...*shakes head*


rm_suds4u24 61M
18 posts
1/17/2007 7:03 am

Shy...:
Loved it Babe - I wait by the road for that "ride"
- Suds -


ShyWhisper2006 replies on 1/17/2007 7:37 am:
*smiles*...Thank you suds4u...I am glad that you liked it

rm_oldhoglover 63M

2/11/2007 12:13 pm

wow!!! I don't have to worry about my jeans being too tight.
They were 'soiled' so I had to take them off!!!


ShyWhisper2006 replies on 2/12/2007 1:25 am:
*smiles*...Welcome to my blog oldhoglover...*giggles*...ooops sorry about that...
Thanks for visiting me *smiles*

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