Lights from afar  

ShyWhisper2006 53F
8597 posts
8/28/2006 3:02 am
Lights from afar

Crashing down
unable to breathe
wave upon wave tumbling you about
clawing upwards , fighting to survive
Directions are lost
paths washed away
Throwing you off course
No warning was given
Chasing
Overtaking
engulfing completely
Unending darkness
to succumb to

Flickers of light...
random but bright
one by one
constant and strong
they appear from near and far
singular less than a watt of energy
slowly amassing and strengthening
warming
lighting
a safe place
a harbor
a refuge from the darkness
wrapping within the combined love
care of many others
pulling you from the depths
warming you
soothing your fears
providing a smile
cutting through the mist
bonding with gentle ties
reassuring and kind
calming till the waters recede
then slowly
fading into the shadows
awaiting
for the next wave
to gather round
the lost one
.



rm_KingEdain 46M
1848 posts
8/28/2006 10:09 am

Nice........... I like it. Glad to see you on my blogs and glad you like what you have seen. Thanks for visiting and come back.


rm_ShineOnU2 55M
125 posts
8/28/2006 2:07 pm

Shy, that's beautiful. For 3:02 A.M. and on this particular morning? It has more light than dark. OOooff!


tadpudgy 56M

8/28/2006 4:35 pm

*Smiles!* Thanks Ms Shy. That was nice. HUG=GASMS!


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/28/2006 7:52 pm

    Quoting rm_KingEdain:
    Nice........... I like it. Glad to see you on my blogs and glad you like what you have seen. Thanks for visiting and come back.
KingEdain ...*smiles* Thank you,,,Your most welcome for my visits...and I shall wander by again as well...


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/28/2006 7:54 pm

    Quoting rm_ShineOnU2:
    Shy, that's beautiful. For 3:02 A.M. and on this particular morning? It has more light than dark. OOooff!
Shine.,..Thank you for the sweet comment...the lights are the people that I get to know a little, here and there......*smiles*


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/28/2006 7:55 pm

    Quoting tadpudgy:
    *Smiles!* Thanks Ms Shy. That was nice. HUG=GASMS!
tadpudgy...Your most welcome my friend....*smies*..Your hug=gasms ...are so intense...*giggles* thank you


rm_Amanes1986 30M
19 posts
8/29/2006 1:52 am

You are talented with the written word, no doubt. ^^


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/29/2006 2:45 am

    Quoting rm_Amanes1986:
    You are talented with the written word, no doubt. ^^
Amanes1986...Welcome to my blog and thank you so very much for your comment...*smiles*


ZZ_Todd 59M

8/29/2006 7:13 am

It's because of friends like you that I stick around!


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/29/2006 5:02 pm

    Quoting ZZ_Todd:
    It's because of friends like you that I stick around!
ZZ_Todd.... *hugs*...just glad that you do...*smiles*


Sailor376 63M
2288 posts
8/29/2006 8:59 pm

So good, so very good. So much free verse here in the blogs is lovely and inspiring and takes me nowhere. Not so on this blog. And you certainly have been just such a beacon for me.
Thank you for the wet umbrella in my my front hall and the welocome of my muddy footprints in yours. What fun.

Dean


ShyWhisper2006 53F
15175 posts
8/30/2006 12:27 am

    Quoting Sailor376:
    So good, so very good. So much free verse here in the blogs is lovely and inspiring and takes me nowhere. Not so on this blog. And you certainly have been just such a beacon for me.
    Thank you for the wet umbrella in my my front hall and the welocome of my muddy footprints in yours. What fun.

    Dean
Sailor...*giggles*...You are most welcome and what a wonderful analogy...


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