~~~ Tearing Lust ~~~  

Serenely_Yours 116
10210 posts
7/7/2006 8:59 am

Last Read:
8/17/2006 5:07 am

~~~ Tearing Lust ~~~

In lust we trust that blinding passion
Building from pent up rages
Sending signs through our skin and senses
Thrusting blindly into a trance-like motion

In love we doubt of our mind together
All greatness of things seem disturbed
Lively emotions faded and worries started
Wanting badly as hope crushes

In need we ask for lust that was once there
Seamlessly blended with time and tide
Intentionally yearning for limitless
Waiting tiredly tear this disguise

In lost we leave and giving up on everything
Once it was blooming but now has gone
The flower of hope has died leaving nothing
Absently forgotten without tracing...



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devitruvianman 39M
71 posts
8/17/2006 4:21 am

the usual cynical serene


eternal1969 46M
1634 posts
7/11/2006 4:38 am

    Quoting Serenely_Yours:
    Dusty Dear, Lady Dear, Posion Darling and Huny Darling. Thank you all for liking this piece of work. It was inspired from another poetry which I read. Im an avid fan of dark erotic, depressive, pessimistic poems. I just cannot help it but to come out with such. I try to write something happy but it seems difficult. No harm trying though. I will. Love and lust. Who do not need it?!

    Eternal Dear, do you mean you and me? I do not mind. Im sure its gonna be a happy review.
*winkz >>!


Serenely_Yours 116
9198 posts
7/8/2006 4:33 am

Dusty Dear, Lady Dear, Posion Darling and Huny Darling. Thank you all for liking this piece of work. It was inspired from another poetry which I read. Im an avid fan of dark erotic, depressive, pessimistic poems. I just cannot help it but to come out with such. I try to write something happy but it seems difficult. No harm trying though. I will. Love and lust. Who do not need it?!

Eternal Dear, do you mean you and me? I do not mind. Im sure its gonna be a happy review.


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eternal1969 46M
1634 posts
7/7/2006 11:33 pm

Maybe we should physically review all the processes again together to see if we can get something optimistic out of it


poison_syrup 43F
8533 posts
7/7/2006 7:51 pm

Its pessimistic somehow... but its beautiful... might not be this cases always... nice stuff do happen when people's in love, in lust and in need. How about doing a optimistic version?


Angel Of Sins


happyladychat 47F
3740 posts
7/7/2006 6:36 pm

As Dusty put it... great poetry.

One favor to ask... try to write something happier lah. After reading this, who dare to be in love, in lust and in need.


Make it your challenge.... turn me ON!!


Serenely_Yours 116
9198 posts
7/7/2006 11:49 am

    Quoting TakethemoneyRUN:
    Becareful. Your blog is being watched by powers from a high intelectual level. When you close your computer and stand up DO NOT TURN LEFT. no matter what you do, do not turn left.
    I'm telling you for your own safety. Don't call the CIA. They know.
Noted your words. I will be careful. And you better too. Theres always something higher than the higher ones.


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