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Advice?  

SashaOmy 44F
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3/7/2020 2:14 pm
Advice?

Working on a piece, a friend said “honey” didn’t fit, any suggestions?

“ He shoved himself inside her and she bucked against the small kitchen table rocking it. She was warm as honey on a summer day, clenching and smooth all the way around. ”

HAMONMAN 64M
13128 posts
3/7/2020 4:26 pm

 how bout 'freshly laid asphalt' ?


jolielaide 52F  
1754 posts
3/7/2020 8:16 pm

 Your friend is c!ueless. Honey does fit the context of the sentence. To use butter seems too obvious; butter melts in summer. Unless you change it entirely. She felt soft as warm butter on a summer day; yielding and easy her flower spread open. Butter spreads but stick with the honey.


Heathen_G 65M
7974 posts
3/7/2020 9:46 pm

 Why would she be "Warm"? ...Here.. try this;

"He backed her up to the kitchen table and shoved himself inside her. She smiled wickedly , this is what she wanted. Her legs wrapped around him, her arms hugged his shoulders, as her hips bucked against him with a quick jackhammer repetition. The small kitchen table sounding each pounding, barely staying together. Her nails bit into his skin, bracing herself , as her pussy griped and lubricating his straining rod with hot oil like fluid as each bucking piston-like stroke pulled him deeper within her."


h4rry66 57M

3/7/2020 9:53 pm

 I'd love to shove myself deep inside her and you x


bcnjavi40 52M
126 posts
3/8/2020 4:13 am
Saludos


SxyLatinJazz_4u 50M
157 posts
3/8/2020 5:12 am

 I like Jolie's suggestion.


jajo696 113F
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3/8/2020 7:21 am

 Soft, smooth and warm as velvet on a hot summers day ~~

You re welcome...lol


jajo696 113F
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3/8/2020 7:24 am
    Quoting HAMONMAN:
    how bout 'freshly laid asphalt' ?
Hamo.....about that business card fodder stuff. Its gotten me in trouble...people are writing saying, ' thanks for the view '....lol


SashaOmy 44F
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3/8/2020 9:03 pm

 Thank you everyone. Jolie, going with what I have... Hammon laughed at asphalt...Jaja also nice suggestion...Heathen you write well,, the scene is already laid out though - great descriptive usage. Thank you for the comments.


66Letshavefun 63M
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3/14/2020 7:39 am

 Why have that line at all, who is it intended for
1. A male reader, not interested.....is it a love story or erotica?
2. A female reader might get it, but small audience
3. You, if that's the answer, you should look at it all and ask, who am I writing this for, ME?


Flbeachguy12345 52M
60 posts
4/13/2020 9:46 am

 Honey is a good fit...because it makes me think sweet as well....sweet to the taste and warm....so sexy.

You could also say warm as fresh apple pie..that might be too funny...lol


Flbeachguy12345 52M
60 posts
4/13/2020 9:47 am

 Will you be posting your stories on your blog?


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