Exposing the shame  

PassionateBeat 44M
156 posts
8/17/2005 6:14 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Exposing the shame


I usually do not like to share my poetry and honestly it is not because it is bad or because I dislike it...
The reason I do not usually share it is because few like poetry and even fewer will admit to liking poetry. Also even if everybody can usually tell at a glance, I tend to want to hide my romantic side from the crowd.

So with all that, here a poem and there may be others to come. That...I must dwell upon.

----------Her Arrival----------

Patiently, I wait immobile
Ready to see, to know it has come
Wanting it to be sooner than some
But remaining uncursing timeís vile

Breathing in deeply and out smoothly
Listening to forestís nightly winter symphony
Looking for the change that would state her arrival
Knowing that it would bring her call

Wind blows the snow in patterns ever changing
Showing that nothing remains but all must be
Wanting all to enjoy that which we would see
I wake from my waked dreaming.

Still alone I stare with my mindís eye
Probing for her presence amongst the pine
But still there is nothing but the windís cry
ÖUpon loneliness I dine.

Daniel "PassionateBeat" 24 March 2000

Sweetgenie_girl 41F

8/17/2005 1:55 pm

PassionateBeat,

I like it and I hope you keep sharing your beautiful talent with us.


PassionateBeat 44M

8/17/2005 3:58 pm

Thanks Sweetgenie_girl, will do.


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

9/24/2005 5:58 am

You would be surprised how many people on here love poetry ... especially the women ... !

You have a beautiful way with language ... I hope you continue to post this part of you ...


PassionateBeat 44M

9/25/2005 7:47 pm

---Huntress7878---
Alot of men will not admit to liking poetry but I amm happy with the audience I have

Thank-you.

Passionatebeat


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