Your words hurt!  

MWWwantsmore 51F
1594 posts
4/26/2006 5:11 am

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4/27/2006 6:58 pm

Your words hurt!

In one breath, you say
that you love me.

In the next breath,
I am always wrong.

In one breath, you say
that you care about me.

In the next breath,
you put me down.

I wish you could see
how your words hurt me.

I wish you could see
how long that hurt lasts.

I wish you could see
how it makes me feel.

Words can hurt as much as fists,
but leaving no visible scars.

The scars are there inside me
I just wish you could see........
what your words are doing to me.

My attempt at poetry, pretty lame!

Kaliedascope61 41M
4084 posts
4/26/2006 10:59 am

Pain is never lame.

MWWwantsmore replies on 4/26/2006 4:46 pm:
That is soo true!

NSAAddict 42F

4/26/2006 3:08 pm

Not lame at all, wish you weren't feeling the pain, hugs to you

MWWwantsmore replies on 4/26/2006 4:47 pm:
Thanks NSA, hugs back

champagnechaser 41F
1639 posts
4/26/2006 3:38 pm

There is nothing lame about expressing your feelings, nice job!

MWWwantsmore replies on 4/26/2006 4:47 pm:
Thanks CC

docdirk 47M

4/26/2006 5:20 pm

If you felt any amount of relief after releasing those words - in ANY form - then there is nothing lame about it. All writing is just a form of expression. It can be your first or last option. If it eases your pain in the least, it's done it's job.

I'll e-mail a hug to you ASAP!!!

Ah, Its you again, Your Angel Feathers and your Blood Stains...

MWWwantsmore replies on 4/26/2006 5:32 pm:
Thanks Doc, it actually did make me feel better putting it in words

CopseAuralRunty 45M
700 posts
4/26/2006 7:47 pm

That was good, It is hard to deal with that kind of pain. no one sees it and the one causing usually thinks you are making it up.

I am so sorry and know how it wears away at you.


Women Women everywhere and not a pussy to eat......

MWWwantsmore replies on 4/27/2006 4:38 am:
Thanks hun

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