LadySucksss 70F
494 posts
11/8/2005 3:39 pm

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm


There is a fire within me
A fire that burns hot for you
Burning hotter for you everyday
With just the touch of your lips
And just the touch of your hand
Or just one look at you, will do
Then that fire begins
To rage uncontrollably
You control this fire
You set inside of me
It belongs to you, you see
There because of you
This fire there within me
That I never knew of
Till the first time you touched me
And pressed your lips to mine
That is when a small spark
Became a raging flame
A flame of passion, desire and love
And then I felt you inside me
Your love blazing in front of me
Like ashes covering me
Your body begins to melt into me
This fire within me has taken over me
Knowing no right or wrong
But only thoughts of you
And the love that I feel
And just like charred red hot embers
It is still there burning, endlessly
I feel the flames of our love
Dancing there deep inside of me
This burn serving as a reminder
Of how your love rages through me
So deep inside for all eternity
Like no one else before
You leave me burning for your touch
For your kiss and your body against mine
I just can't get enough
This fire is so immense
So full of energy and heat
Even water could not quench
This fire inside of me
And only you know how
To set me free
From the pain that I feel
Your love can burn it all away
And leave only your love
There inside of me
There I feel it again
Its a burning rage for you again
Always it will remain
And I beg of you to keep your love
Burning there endlessly
Because without you and your love
There would be no fire there within me...

rm_anacortes 74M
2850 posts
11/9/2005 10:35 am

without you and your love
There would be no fire there within me...

THIS I DO NOT BELIEVE... however, if you are doing a "love poem".. it would be pretty "codependant"..

I BELIEVE YOUR "ETERNAL FLAME".. your gift from creation.. burns within you.. even if you are not aware of it.. as many Yin are not..

You, ARE A GODDESS, and always will be.. for eternity..

LadySucksss 70F

11/11/2005 5:52 pm

Oh shit,,,,,why get so technical over a poem? The fire is the man and WITHOUT the MAN there is NO FIRE.....

The Eternal Flame does burn inside of me.....which I believe is my GOD GIVEN FLAME and not the flame of sex.....this poem is about the flame of sex.....

and too, I never have thought I was codependent...but maybe I am...who knows? I love having a man and if this is codependent, then YES I am codependent!

rm_anacortes 74M
2850 posts
11/12/2005 10:00 am

Plz be gentle....

Poems come from the heart right?

The only major thing between us it seems is a belief in Tao.. the golden MIDDLE way.. the balance of Yin AND Yang..

"but maybe I am...who knows? I love having a man"

What is "having a man"???

How does one "have anybody"??

Plz.. dont think I am judging you.. hopefully blogland is about openness...


LadySucksss 70F

11/14/2005 11:11 pm

Having a man .........is........making love with him......

in my book anyways......

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