Waves Crushed by the Black Sky  

Kaliedascope61 41M
3157 posts
2/25/2006 1:16 pm

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Waves Crushed by the Black Sky

Waves crushed the black sky

I don't remember wanting anything more
And the distance is the only thing long term
I have crawled for days to get to you
Only to find that you’re no longer there

I wanted so badly
To take these dreams as far as they can go
But what I needed,
And what you feared the most
Have only ended a beautiful possibility

It was always there in the anticipation
Which becomes an ache that was dreaded
Then I became alienated
And you don't know how to feel free

I couldn't help but want to rely
So much was depending on air
Waves crushed the black sky
And I was left standing there

The point has been reached where I cared
But no longer am I concerned
Taking it or leaving it, no longer matters
It’s the battle to regain the thought

© Kaliedascope61 September 2005


southrnpeach333 50F

2/25/2006 4:06 pm

Great poem! Sad but great.


champagnechaser 41F
1639 posts
2/25/2006 7:23 pm

Sad. Beautiful. Tragic. Such pretty words.


kelly402005 52F

2/25/2006 8:30 pm

I love it......so much! Honestly..........
I hope you don't mind this....


wanting leads
to so much

we fill ourselves
with all
we long for

not recognizing
space
or
thought

minds
have a way
of doing what
they want

free will....

dread
alienation
anticipation
depending

why do we
feel?

the waves crushed the black sky


Kaliedascope61 41M
4084 posts
3/2/2006 9:50 am

ty


Kaliedascope61 41M
4084 posts
3/2/2006 9:51 am


Kaliedascope61 41M
4084 posts
3/2/2006 9:52 am

    Quoting kelly402005:
    I love it......so much! Honestly..........
    I hope you don't mind this....

    wanting leads
    to so much

    we fill ourselves
    with all
    we long for

    not recognizing
    space
    or
    thought

    minds
    have a way
    of doing what
    they want

    free will....

    dread
    alienation
    anticipation
    depending

    why do we
    feel?

    the waves crushed the black sky
very nice


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