Silence - A poem  

HersheyCoco2 52M  
85 posts
8/8/2005 12:22 pm

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Silence - A poem

When I was born, Silence
greeted my ears,
not able to hear my cries,
nor my mother's sighs of joy,
As time goes by .....

All my friends hear,
not by a hands wave,
but by the spoken word,
a thing that I have never heard,
that makes up their lives,
As time goes by ....

Silence .....
hides in the beat of the music,
The loneness never goes,
yet no one really knows,
what solace I truly seek,
As time goes by ....

Not able to hear my cries,
nor my mothers sighs of joy
As time goes by .......

© copyright HersheyCoco2 2006

elizarvs 40F

8/8/2005 8:48 pm

very interesting poem!

justsayhi2005 51F

8/8/2005 9:18 pm

Hershey, thank you for telling me about your blog Your poem is really very touching and courageous

nastyfunwild 45F

8/16/2005 2:07 pm

Very nice!!

rm_autumngirl61 55F
741 posts
8/31/2005 8:52 pm

HersheyCoco, I'm related to your poem, too, sweetie. Very good!


9/5/2005 6:00 pm

Sensual, and thought provoking.

rm_pepper128 68F
5 posts
9/12/2005 12:51 pm

Hershey your poem is very touching and beautiful

BlueRoseWolf 49F

10/10/2005 10:15 am

great poem hun

TheLilFondler 33F  
2576 posts
11/9/2005 12:31 pm

that is a beautiful poem sweet cheeks.... i really liked it hun *fondles n sucks

i lost my virginity years ago.....
but i still have the box.....

Babel__Fish 45F

2/7/2006 6:21 am

I REALLY like this poem and glad that you have found our group.


GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
2/8/2006 11:40 am

Made me think of [post 216045]

beautiful ....

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 11:55 am:
Thank you goddes,

And I am touched and honored to meet you.

Nice poem


MyHeartLost4U 52M
2303 posts
3/1/2006 6:04 am

Quite a profound poem and made me think of my life and my mother.

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 11:58 am:
Heya Dreamlover,

We all tend to think of our parents from time to time. Hope you had a good reflection on your thoughts of your mother.


rm_JustAwhisper 48F
96 posts
3/1/2006 8:06 am

What a wonderful way of sharing with us.. Do you have more?

rm_kinkycc 67F
21 posts
10/10/2006 4:58 am

love the poem Sweetie, such touching sentiments from a beautiful heart. Luv ya

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 11:44 am:

Kind words from a person near my hometown....looking forward to seeing you sometime.


want2play926 45F

10/13/2006 7:42 am

Wow! A few family members that were born deaf. Very touching

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 11:44 am:
Ahh want to now you want to play with me ??? lol c'mere girl at least you know how to communicate with me


rm_CodyGirl1 58F

10/16/2006 5:39 pm

Very hauntingly moving. Makes me realize how much I take for granted in my life. Thank you so much for sharing this poem with me. Quite an insight into quite a guy.

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 11:46 am:
Cody Baby ... we all take things for granted ... never thought I would see my wife pass away before my 40th birthday...wish I could have told her I loved her one more time.


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

10/20/2006 2:46 am

A beautifully written piece and what a way to begin a blog ... I have a feeling you've only cracked the window and have given us just a peek at what is to come ...

I look forward to enjoying much more of this ...

Huntress SS#

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/20/2006 12:05 pm:

The poems, you once had on your profile gave me courage to write this poem on my blog. People have asked me for others. Have had trouble getting them down ....wanted to do another one on how the late wife knew the solace I was looking for, but alas was not able to do it.

Just got to keep trying.


rm_MetvsYankee 34M/35F

10/22/2006 2:10 pm

Wow..that was just an amazing poem..I have only just recently started talking to I had no idea...but from the little that I do see and I have just read your an awesome and amazing person..Thank you for sharing

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/22/2006 3:24 pm:

Thank you very much for your kind words. I will keep you up to date on the whole thing


Adam69Eva2005 47F

10/25/2006 7:42 am

Thx for telling me about ur poem Hershey .
Very nice & touchable . U seems to be very sensual man , and lonely ...

Why ?

rm_shyladyinnj 61F

10/25/2006 9:02 am

What a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing such a heartful story. It touch my heart so i cried. You are a very loving man dont ever change. xoxoxoxo

froggie8038 56F  
3 posts
10/25/2006 4:07 pm

I Loved the poem and I am glad that you shared it with. Wishing you great sucess in your surgery. I am real glad that we started talking. I am sorry that your wife passed away, I know that feeling real well my husband passed away in Febuary. Your poem really touched my heart and i will keep you in my prayers.

doublethefunMF28 39M/36F
155 posts
10/25/2006 7:37 pm

Very beautiful Hershey, Very beautiful.

HersheyCoco2 replies on 10/25/2006 9:16 pm:

thank you for your kind words. Getting my surgery soon, hope to hear better.

Hershey Kisses to you {=}{=}

rm_ongirret 41M

10/27/2006 9:21 pm

hey hershey good luck with everything

SexyCoolToy 35F

11/2/2006 10:33 am

Hersh, this poem is unbelievably touching!! You truly warmed my heart with your sincere words and honesty.... What a beautiful poem...

oringial1 47M/40F

12/4/2006 6:19 pm

Having met Hershey I can say that he is a man who hears with his heart and is a deceent person. I wish him the best success with his surgery and hope he is able to do what so many of us take for granted--hear things like a dog barking. There are not many people like Hershey in this world anymore. Good heart good soul good sense of humor and just a good person. I am honored to have met him.

MyCupsFullnTotem 52M/52F
1 post
9/19/2007 10:09 pm

Hershey Very Insightful poem Hope the surgery worked for you.

suenbill4u 54M/52F

2/29/2012 12:00 am

Hersh,That's beautiful.Almost made me cry.You have a way with words.

HersheyCoco2 52M  
126 posts
2/29/2012 12:24 am

MyCups.... I would like to smother my face inside your girl's shirt... hope all is good with you ..

HersheyCoco2 52M  
126 posts
2/29/2012 9:18 am

Sue, thank you for a kind insight

makemecum357 58F  
54 posts
1/18/2015 10:07 am

Oh now that was beautiful....................

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