Story... 1st part... more to come  

Frnds4Play 53M/63F
2686 posts
8/3/2005 8:31 am

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5/3/2012 5:43 pm

Story... 1st part... more to come


About a week ago I added a post entitled "Ladies, please help me write an erotic story". I got 2 comments. One from Kat. And one from tamethytension, a guy.

Tamethytension suggested we collaborate. I was hesitant at first but did send him an email. We tossed some ideas back and forth and came up with a story idea. This is the first installment.

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Turnabout

My husband doesn't think I'm very smart. And I have to admit that for a long time I thought he was right. After all he was making good money and when I tried to get a job after John, our son, left for college I ended up bagging groceries in the local supermarket. Not very impressive.

Hubby was horrified to learn that his wife was stuffing cans of tomatoes and bags of chips into the plastic sacks of his clientele, among others.

“Honey, you don’t have to work. I make plenty,” he said.

“I’m not doing it for the money,” I said. “I was going stir crazy. John’s gone and when you’re home you spend most of your time on your computer.”

“Honey, you know how hard it is to stay on top,” he said. “I’ve told you enough times. Those punk kids want to run over my ass. Gary and Caroline especially. So I have to go the extra mile.”

“I know, I know,” I said. “But that means I’m alone most of the time. I had to get out.”

He grumbled for awhile, and pouted, but after a couple of weeks we’d settled into a routine.

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Feedback is requested.

GoddessOfTheDawn 105F
11240 posts
8/3/2005 12:43 pm

Was it a new routine, or were you slipping back into an old pattern? And was there time for each other in it.... or was he still just busy with the staying on top in business..... lotz of pathz to choose from ...

which one will be chosen...


HardlyYours4Now 52M

8/3/2005 12:55 pm

...and will Gary or Caroline end up 'on top' in a literal sense? I'm expecting some kind of triangle here - but who will be left out?

I love the start. And I'll return the comment you made on my blog - you deserve more comments! But there are a lot of voyeurs out there...


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