Inspiration & Hope  

EyEmLadyLuck 44F
48 posts
11/21/2005 1:29 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Inspiration & Hope


I lounge safely in my camouflage
The outer shell a masquerade
I laugh at your spoken fears
Yet mine have fallen so near

Needing a man to be strong
To know where my heart belongs
And I've got to make him see
Not to be afraid in holding me tenderly

Savored on today’s tongue of vision
Forsaken not yesterdays retrovision
Seeing your heart sagging like the willow
Leaving room for only one on your pillow

It is hard for you to reveal
The things that time has yet to heal
For thee I volunteer as a friend
Siphoning the pain so you may mend

Happy ever after's not so easy to aquire
No one could ever measure up to our desire
All you need is a little time
'Cause time he’s been a friend of mine

I try my best to live… how about you
Only you can make broken dreams come true
When you’re standing at heaven's door
Isn’t there someone you’d like to be waiting for

For every question there is an answer
A destination only your heart can see
I just kept praying for an everlasting eclipse
Until words exchanged across our lips

I struggle for the words to the perfect line
But no matter what I say I can't define
There is pyromancy between us
Just like a moth drawn to a flame

KC_JJ 54M

11/21/2005 2:17 am

Nice poem!

But the recycler in me couldn't help but see this line

"Seeing your _heart_ sagging like the willow"

and thinking that if you made the word "heart" a variable or a blank space that that some day you could probably again reuse this line with a modified context in a different romance or erotica oriented poem.

Just don't let the Viagra company see it or they might steal it and put in put into on of their greeting card/gift packages or something.

KC_JJ

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nunow1970 47M
4 posts
11/23/2005 7:04 pm

ED. is my name and i've been winking at you and have'nt found a good line of communication untill now. Nice poem, coming from a man like me,that was nice! Sorry theres no pic of me on this site,i've got pics,just dont no how to get them here. My profile is at AdultFriendFinder I'm also in youngstown,ohio and would like to experience some adult pleasures with people that will enjoy the man whom your in bed with


JUST_SEX_NO_GAME 47M

11/24/2005 7:15 am

Happy Thanksgiving sweetie!!!


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