The waiting poem  

CuteAZguy27 39M
2154 posts
9/26/2005 8:44 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

The waiting poem

I wait for the peace, and i wait for the joy, I wait for the one who hit you, if it was a girl or a boy.

I wait for that college grade of yours if its an A or B and i will hold you tightly if you got a D. School is not always easy and not always hard, but ill help you study and keep on your guard.

I'll wait past the gloom, and ill wait patiently till you get out of your room, My little pearl, ill wait that extra mile to see you smile ear to ear like a little girl.

I'll wait for that extra day just for you, wanting to hold and smell and smile as we walk on the beach for that extra mile, hand in hand with our toes covered in the sand.

I'll wait for you, cause at this moment i don't know you, you may know me as CuteAZ-but ill wait right here for you till eternity.


@ copyright CuteAZguy27

-CuteAZguy27


SweetDarlinAngel 39F
2996 posts
9/26/2005 4:07 pm

Cute~
I love it. The anticipation of meeting someone new, no matter who it is whether it is a newborn child, a blind date or brand new puppy. Your poems are hitting me right in the pitter patter part of my heart. So sweet and sentimental, so charming. Such a lucky lucky lady she will be when you finally find the one you want to hold on to. <sighs with a twinge of jealousy>
~SDA

~Angel


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/26/2005 10:25 pm

SweetDarlinAngel-
Thank you very much, that was very sweet, im glad that you liked them it means allot.

-CuteAZguy27


_CoffeeNoCream_ 52F

9/27/2005 12:12 am

*smiles*.....its lovely


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/27/2005 11:25 am

_CoffeeNoCream_ - did you really like it ? Sometimes i want to post poems such as these yet a fear of getting rejected, yet i only have 2 comments, so what does that tell yah lol, anyways thanx for posting, most appreciated.

-CuteAZguy27


__Huntress__ 55M/57F

9/27/2005 4:13 pm

This is so adorable ... never, ever be afraid to post your poems ... I hesitate everytime I hit that button to submit ... just do it !


jungandhorney 42F

9/27/2005 4:32 pm

*sigh

but will you kick my ass when I am being lazy and not reading the chapter I should be reading for Behavioral Neuroscience?


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/28/2005 11:10 am

Huntress7878 -

Thank you ! never be afraid *takes a deep breath* ok, i understand -just do it

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/28/2005 11:12 am

jungandhorney

Of coarse i wouldn't kick it, now if you wanted me to whip it for your own pleasure-thats another blog, but besides those 2, not at all.

-CuteAZguy27


demonicsexkitten 41F
10671 posts
9/29/2005 12:01 am

I like it

So... if i get 4.0's this quarter like i'm striving for, will you celebrate with me???


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