Finding your favorite design in the sky  

CuteAZguy27 39M
2154 posts
9/24/2005 11:27 am

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3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Finding your favorite design in the sky

I lay there on the porch swing
looking into the stars that are just reminding me-the beauty the Author has on the creativity-


I look up to see the fading blue, my heart aches when i see this cause the joy and care that i see in you,

Yet i notice the star that is so red, reminds me of the fire in you that i just cant comprehend, your determination is just so strong with might, it takes my gaze to that star right there that is so beautiful but bright

....finding these favorite stars and designs in the sky was easier to do, all i had to do was take a step back and look at the suprise, cause this whole time i was gazing not at the stars, yet at the beauty in your eyes.


-CuteAZguy27

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Mood: Romantic


keithcancook 60M
17865 posts
9/24/2005 12:41 pm

Very nice. Yet take care to watch where you are going when you are gazing deeply into a womans eyes. You may just step off of the edge of the Universe.


demonicsexkitten 41F
10672 posts
9/24/2005 12:43 pm

ohhh... that's very sweet


rm_1hotwahine 63F
21091 posts
9/24/2005 12:59 pm

Yes, very nice. Question: was this inspired by an actual human, or one that you know to be there somewhere?

Yeah, I'm still [blog 1hotwahine]


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/24/2005 1:10 pm

1hotwahine-

Answer: inspired by no one in particular, just deep from the heart.

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/24/2005 1:11 pm

demonicsexkitten- thanks kitten !

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/24/2005 1:14 pm

keithcancook- speaking to a man who has more wisdom than i, as you spoke of watching my step before clinging to my death-err stepping off the universe....do these things run on esculators ?

-CuteAZguy27


Theflinkychick 105F

9/24/2005 3:19 pm

very, very nice... I write a lot about stars so I really liked this... prose poetry! coool, don't see much around and I really enjoy it, thanks...

Not all who wander are lost.


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/24/2005 4:54 pm

Theflinkychick- you are so welcome and thank you for commenting-makes me glad that someone who is touched and appreciative of what was written !

-CuteAZguy27


sensually_me

9/24/2005 6:46 pm

aww, very romantic, sweet. I'm glad you wrote it! Makes me want to go star gazing.

My favorite line: cause this whole time i was gazing not at the stars, yet at the beauty in your eyes. Some gal is going to be very lucky when you find her.


DirtyLilSecret61 55F

9/24/2005 9:01 pm

Awesome, absolutely awesome.

You made me sigh outloud.

"Lil"


yagottalikit 49F
583 posts
9/24/2005 11:30 pm

Thank you, Cutie, for being you and sharing your depth

Yagotta get it soft and wet so we can kick/stick it


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/25/2005 7:42 am

sensually_me-I believe the lady who i meet up with will be beyond spoiled due to my touch and words.

I have you to give the credit too due to this poem,yourself said i should make a poem out of it, so i sat down and put my heart to work-and with many scribbles and deletes and going back, here we have what we have now, and i say-thank you.

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/25/2005 7:44 am

DirtyLilSecret61-well thank you lil, here a tissue-just incase my dear.

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/25/2005 7:48 am

yagottalikitYou are very welcome ! To be honest, My heart is full of these, and this is the first poem that i have written down-yet was pretty scared to at the same time.

You are welcome to every aspect of what you have wriiten above .

-CuteAZguy27


SweetDarlinAngel 39F
2996 posts
9/26/2005 9:18 am

Cute ~
Awww... that was awesome, so sweet and heartfelt. So romantic. I felt like I was reading about your true love. Very nice. Great poem.
<sighs as she tucks feet underneath her and dreams of day she can finally meet CuteAZGuy face to face>
~SDA

~Angel


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/26/2005 1:48 pm

I hand mizzkitka's a tissue,...thank you

-CuteAZguy27


CuteAZguy27 39M
1545 posts
9/26/2005 1:59 pm

SweetDarlinAngel-Thank you very much, very appreciated! Now do you know where i can find a porch swing ?

-CuteAZguy27


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