Peeping Tom  

CantonOhCouple 60M/60F
370 posts
10/29/2005 5:22 pm

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Peeping Tom

The wine, a nice merlot,
consumed too soon,
even as we,
the three of us,
consumed the
sight, and touch,
scent and sense,
of each other.

Host,
gathering glasses empty,
withdrawing
just for the moment.

Sex is such thirsty work.

As I return,
I hear the sounds,
of lovers, and
stop to listen, voyeur.

Her voice, all flutes and oboes,
laughs and giggles,
his, a baritone, rumbling,
gentle earth tones.

Until I hear, the break, the catch,
of her voice, glissando,
his in counterpoint,
all drums and cymbals.

Waiting, listening,
rapt audience,
of one.

Bravo!!!


CantonOhCouple 60M/60F
553 posts
10/30/2005 5:46 am

Peeping Tom describes a treasured memory of a recent encounter.

I think that for a MFM couple to work, there must be a touch of voyeurism in him. A capacity for delight in hearing, seeing, feeling her enjoyment with your partner. It takes trust. Trust in yourself, trust in her, and to a lesser degree, trust in your friend.


OhioNiceGuy1122 65M
21 posts
10/30/2005 2:16 pm

Wonderful poetry ... bravo!


rm_mwm34 48M

10/31/2005 3:47 am

I can't agree more. Trust is so very important, for all parties involved. And yes, there has to be a voyeur in him, and an enjoyment of watching his partner with another.
Great blog, well written.


BullsTardeMeant 56M
837 posts
10/31/2005 9:34 am

Soooo sensuous. ... Sex as art. ... You two are a credit to our species. Your mature perspective adds such grace to this all-to-often immature website. Keep up the great blog.


GOT SOME?


CantonOhCouple 60M/60F
553 posts
11/1/2005 4:11 am

OhioNiceGuy - Thanks for the kind words.

MWM - Trust is probably the most important part of any relationship. And our adult adventures have only deepened our understanding of each other.

Milkit7 - Sex as Art! What a wonderful term. We are glad that you like our blogging.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/1/2005 9:44 pm

I agree with all on this one. I like the sex as art, also.
Like your poem. Good expression, open, honest. It speaks a lot about the writer. unlisted


CantonOhCouple 60M/60F
553 posts
11/4/2005 6:53 pm

Unlisted,

Thank you for you kind words. Erotic prose is hard to write, and we don't mean to imply the obvious pun. But expressing explicit passion or sexual encounters without sounding like a cheap porn sound track is a bit of a challenge. Fun though.


rm_unlistedone 65M
2718 posts
11/9/2005 1:02 am

I think that may well be one of the reasons I don't attempt it. I never can make it sound... right.


CantonOhCouple 60M/60F
553 posts
11/10/2005 6:58 pm

Unlistedone

Its rare that anything I write in this vein is worth letting other people see. But this one turn out nice. I know what you mean though. It is VERY difficult.


JUST_SEX_NO_GAME 47M

11/17/2005 9:22 am

I'm all smiles. Lovely poetry.
I would love for you to check out my new group Melt the MIC Mondays. It is a group of free expression for poets. And, for more of my thoughts, questions and ideas on many other topics check out my blog JUST_SEX_NO_GAME


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