Nighttrain  

Barbiebunny69 43F
1457 posts
9/7/2005 12:53 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

Nighttrain

unrelenting rhythm, rattle and hum
of the wheels
as they roll over the tracks
shaking them fiercely
that always keeps me awake.

a distant melody that's too loud to ignore.
Not even the darkness
that inundates the compartments at night
seems to help.
It is worse
at night
when the stars are the only lights visible
in the vast, muted space outside
whizzing by my window.

On this train,
a shadowy world
of sleeping figures
reside
the Nightstalker roams free
With a devious, mischevious smile
knowing the next stop
and anticipating
a unique passinger
with a wide wikked grin
familiiar with the shakes.

She watches in the gloom
of the car
waits waits waits
for the thundering train to arrive
In a downpour of black rain on the tracks
She could feel him
She felt the train Shiver
As he came aboard
His black trench was soaked
His head turned down
She recognized his black boots....
Daywalker


rm_FreeLove999 46F
16127 posts
9/7/2005 10:39 am

cool poem! i actually sleep well on trains, think it rocks me to sleep. but the only time i ever got laid on a train was with my husband. o, yeah, i once had this cop hitting on me, but i hate cops...



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SeekingFun337 64M/60F
657 posts
9/7/2005 10:46 am

Interesting.... TBC ... leaves one wondering if she needs mace, or is finding what she is looking for... would prefer the later..


keithcancook 60M
17833 posts
9/7/2005 2:47 pm

I have been drawn to trains since I was a lad. However, I have never lived over the tracks!


expatbrit49 62M

9/7/2005 4:31 pm

MMmmm that reminds me of some great train sex I had once Thanks Bunny

Thank You for Your Time and Attention


BenefitsFriend69 57M/60F

9/8/2005 9:00 am

Casey Jones you better watch your speed..
Ride yo' train!

PS--Perhaps the man in the black boots is Jerry Garcia's ghost..


Theflinkychick 105F

9/8/2005 11:16 am

I like this poem, loved ths line--
'with a wide wikked grin
familiiar with the shakes.

good job

Not all who wander are lost.


toothysmile 50M
16515 posts
9/9/2005 2:09 am

Beautiful! Wonderfully written!

I love trains. Every great movie has a train in it. (true)
On a different note there 's an old song by Steve Winwood called 'Night train'.

Love the atmosphere of this post. Thanks Barbie.


MsLoveRose 33F  
2432 posts
9/11/2005 9:07 am

nice...night trains...hell any trains..are hot!

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