In the space and time...  

Barbiebunny69 43F
1457 posts
8/24/2005 11:18 am

Last Read:
3/5/2006 9:27 pm

In the space and time...

Its in that crack in the sky
That I desire to return to
Where time stands still

The Air is crisper there
I can breathe more freely
Its a space of only you & I

I dress for such special occasion
I cover my red toenails with black silk
I pull them up gently over my calves and up to mid thigh
I slip on my Crimson Gstring
I don my red leather gloves

I feel HER begin to swell
She has awakened deep from her slumber
In my soul

I lace up my big red stiletto boots
Stomp them hard for security
I slick on the blood red lipstick on my lips

I open my old antique english wardrobe
Instead of a gateway to Narnia
Its a gateway to HER world.

Brilliant Corsets folded with care
Like the little girl I steal one of Hers to put on
Shiny gleaming red leather corset calls my name
And I look like HER

I scan all the toys made of steel and leather
Hanging in HER unique wardrobe
And my Heart begins to ache
because the time is near
I feel Her close
The press of Her presence

I lock my garters into place
I reach for the new toy on a red velvet pillow
My left hand grasps the thick red leather collar
I study it.

This is for no ordinary being
This was made for royalty in the realm
The Center had a golden head of a dragon
and in its teeth dripped a golden D-ring

An artist lovingly scribed the name of the owner
In matching gold lettering on one side
and a Golden Dragon painted the other
It glittered in the low light of the room

And with my right hand
I grabbed the handle and gripped it tight
Her favorite crop in my hand
Her power, Her septre which she used to rule the Kingdom
I knelt on one knee after I locked the wardrobe
And worshipped to Her to come
To magically open the crack in the sky
I longed to return home to.

As I stood up, and turned around
I caught an image of myself in the mirror

And I stepped out into the Garden
To hunt down the owner
To this collar
That belonged to HIM

EdgeofdesireM 47M

8/24/2005 3:15 pm

What a powerful exposition of the turning
the awakening
the deep rousing from the slumber
of the innermost desires
of the innermost self.
Hail to HER
The HER that is You.

rm_bella_ 47F
4030 posts
8/24/2005 7:56 pm

You paint quite a picture of your outfit...ultra sexy!! And I love the red!

luckywithladeez 49M
266 posts
8/25/2005 6:53 am

It be the dawn’s disgrace
The only fault in heaven’s place
The moment when perfection wilts
The fault before the heavens guilt.

Where time is plainly nature’s flaw
Where innocence itself recedes
Where God himself doth look away
Where mortal sin and guilt outweigh

No salient deed, only splendor silence
Whence all creation pales, then wilts
Whence no finer melody ever makes
Whence at last…SHE…awakes.

FriendlyTickler 45M

8/25/2005 1:36 pm

Very nice, like I said before, you're good.

BenefitsFriend69 57M/60F

8/26/2005 10:07 am

Wow.. I have shivers!!!

rm_amo3825 52M
1 post
8/28/2005 10:54 pm

ohhhh my..............

Barbiebunny69 43F

8/29/2005 6:55 pm

This has been a interesting post to watch. Peoples responses.. and knowing what little information I know about them...I enjoy them all and thank you for the comments.....they mean a lot. xxxooo B

luckywithladeez 49M
266 posts
8/29/2005 8:08 pm


My reply actually took a lot more research into your blogging past than at first it may seem. I found your wonderful post here juxtaposed against your recent complex background for which I can, of course, have no intimate knowledge. However, as I have a clear mental image of your character, coupled with what I perceived as a distinct spiritual attraction, thence I proceeded to describe your poem in my own words contrasted with how I would perceive you awakening in the morning--short, direct, and unmistakable adoration.

Finally, I felt that any explanation would only belittle either poem, and therefore ruin any interpretation.


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