In A Time Before All Of This  

AtomicArtist0 45M
5236 posts
4/2/2006 8:45 pm

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In A Time Before All Of This

Just as a teaser, I have posted this story that will not make the cut for caressmewell’s writing competition followed shortly by the next post that will. Enjoy. This one is called…

In A Time Before All Of This

It was one of those rare occasions that she let me fuck her in the ass and I looked down at myself…at us, savoring the moment. She was fully naked and bent over the couch. I held her narrow waist tightly and admired her ass and curving hips and how they sloped larger than her waistline exactly the way I liked it. And there I was, naked myself and thrusting my full length into her and I could see her tight anus expelling KY lube with every thrust.

And there I was, naked myself and thrusting on one of those rare occasions that she let me fuck her in the ass. “Harder”, she grunted under her breath, “harder!” The sun was out, the windows were wide open and the air was clean and mild enough that butterflies and hummingbirds were out in the garden. There was the lake with boaters and swimmers frolicking and the mountain loomed clearly on the horizon…the same mountain that I knew would someday blow its top and kill us all…but until that happens, I have all of this on one of the most beautiful Saturdays ever known and that nothing…absolutely nothing could ever ruin this moment in this little corner of time in the world.

“Yoohoo!”, the voice said in the other room. Holy Christ! It was her mother! She had let herself in as the door was unlocked! What the fuck were we thinking, doing this on a fucking Saturday afternoon while she was out tending her garden…our garden? What the fuck were we thinking?

“Where are you guys?”, she called. I was frozen with fear. What the fuck do we do? Our clothes were in the bedroom upstairs. This place was small. We were fucked for sure. My girlfriend looked back at me over her shoulder and smiled. She fucking smiled, can you believe it? Fucking smiled!

“We’re in here, mom!” OH, SHIT!! What the flying fuck was she thinking?! My hands were shaking now, clutching my girlfriend’s hips. My mouth hung agape. Her sphincter tightened around my cock as if to say…“you’re not going anywhere, Mr.” I don’t think I was breathing at all for what seemed like an eternity.

“I picked up your mail and…(gasp!) OH, MY GOD!!” She almost dropped our mail as she walked in on us and was startled and visibly shaken to see us like this…to see me…and there I was naked on one of those rare occasions that her darling daughter let me fuck her in the ass.

“OH, MY GOD” she repeated, but she didn’t turn away, just staring at us and our entwined predicament. Her face went flush, she let out a nervous laugh, and smiled. Like mother, like daughter. “It looks like you two have been busy.”

We remained there, my hands around her daughter’s waist, shaking. We stared at each other, wondering what would come of this. What would our future hold now that she had caught us in such a sinister act. Her sphincter tightened around my cock.

“That looks good” she said after gaining a little composure. Still a little flushed, she moved in closer to us…closer to me, to get a different view. She came around beside me and got in very close, brushing her elbow against my naked hip. “hey there, handsome”, she smiled, her hand on my shoulder now.

“Hi”, I said. It was an awkward moment and I didn’t know what else to say. She was always better at steering the conversation anyway. For the first time in what seemed like forever, I was able to breath almost normally now. She leaned in close, very close…her head against my shoulder now, her dyed red hair brushing against my chest. She leaned in to get my point of view. “let me see”, her arm was around my waist now. I spread her darling daughter’s ass cheeks wide and pulled away from her, but not all the way. Just enough to offer her a view…a view of my girth…of my cock. She gave that little smile just like her daughter as she savored the view. “Oh, my…you’re in there pretty deep, aren’t you? That looks good. Really good.” her arm was wrapped around my waist and she was squeezing my naked buttocks with her left hand, and her right was caressing my stomach. “Will you do me like that later?”, she asked.

“Ok, sure”, I said nervously. It wasn’t as entirely as awkward as I though it would be. After all, she had seen me naked plenty of times, I had also seen her pee in the garden outside my window and we had fucked occasionally. Its just that she had never seen me fucking her daughter before, and especially not in the ass.

‘Ok, handsome”, she stated, then gave me a quick, but savage kiss on the lips while she squeezed my ass. Our tongues locked for a brief second. Just as quick, she pulled away and headed away from me and to her daughter, my girlfriend.

“Are we going to watch our shows tonight, mom?”, she asked. She pushed her daughter‘s hair away from her face and admired her look…bent over on all fours on one of those rare occasions she lets me fuck her in the ass. She caressed her cheek and inserted her thumb into her own daughter‘s mouth and let her suck tenderly. “Sure, sweetie.” Then she was off. She turned and looked directly at me with a knowing wink and a smile. Like mother, like daughter. “Come on over when you’ve recovered.”, she said.

“…up”

“…up”

“…wake up”, she said. “Its time to take your medication.” it was her mom. I was on the couch under the covers. It was sunny and warm, but I was cold. It was a Saturday. The pain in my face brought me back to reality.

“You know, the dentist said that these meds could make you sleepy…and give you vivid dreams. I came in here and you were groaning like a bear. What on earth were you thinking about?”

“nu’tin”, I lied through my throbbing jaw…the images of my fantasy still vivid in my mind. She gave me a knowing look as if she knew otherwise. I almost wished she did. Think what you want about the meds…I’ve been having these fucking demented fantasies for awhile now. I don’t know why I keep having these goddamned humiliating fantasies with you in them, I thought, but the less sex I had, the more fucked up these dreams became. Assuredly what I was thinking of was nothing on this earth.

“As dizzy as you are, you can’t even climb stairs. That’s why you’re down here. You may have to sleep down here tonight.” It wouldn’t fucking matter, anyway, I thought. She’s frigid. Your darling daughter is frigid, I wanted to say, but couldn’t. Probably for the best. “mmmph”, was all I could get out. My head was spinning. My mouth was bleeding. I tried not to puke.

She assured me that I wasn’t doing anything wrong. The few times we ever have sex anymore, she said it was amazing. She wished she could enjoy sex more, but her libido had just dried up entirely at the ripe old age of twenty-five. She was very sorry, and didn’t know what was wrong with her. She cried about it often. She knew it wasn’t normal. I kept reminding her of that with that statistic…three times a week is average. She was also reminded by her married couple friends who had a jar that they put a quarter in every time they had sex, then eventually saved up enough quarters to fly to Hawaii on vacation. We had no jar of quarters. Even putting a ten dollar bill into the jar whenever we had sex wouldn’t even get us a bus ride to Tacoma. I would have been happy with two times a week. Or one. Why can’t it be the way it used to be when we first went out, back when resting her head on my shoulder and listening to my voice was her greatest comfort. I was seven years older than her, and visibly so. I should have been the tired one with the lowered libido. I wasn’t. She wondered if it was the birth control or something hereditary. Her younger sister, who looked older, had never had a sexual thought in her life. She thought sex was gross. She told us it was gross that anyone would sleep naked…with all that skin touching the sheets. Even being in the shower was gross, she said, as you have to be naked in there…and that’s gross. Her sister was twenty-two and a virgin and already happy to be a spinster. She never masturbated nor cared to. Now her older sister…my girlfriend…this woman’s darling daughter…the cuter of the two sisters (lucky me!) was starting to feel the same way as our sex went from twice a week, to once a week, to once a month with me pulling huge guilt trips, to once every three months, to never at all. She said I deserved more. I deserved someone better than her. The less sex I had, the more fucked up my fantasies became. She never said harder…harder! to me and its been years since she let me fuck her in the ass.

“…Take this” her mom announced. She had three hands each holding a large oblong white pill. The room was spinning. I just stared. I didn’t know which hand to choose. I couldn’t function. Finally, she pushed the pill into my mouth. Her thumb was in my mouth. It tasted like dirt. She had been in the garden. This wasn’t as hot as the fantasy let on. She gave me water to wash it down and had the foresight to think of a straw.

“There, that wasn’t so bad, was it?” She got up and put the water glass back on the kitchen counter. “I‘ve picked up your mail, here it is,” then continued“ Are you going to be ok to watch our shows tonight?, “ she asked.

“ Mmmmph” was all I could get out. She looked down on the couch at me lying there and gave that knowing wink and little smile. That smile… like she knows something. Like mother, like daughter. I was dizzy and in pain. “Well, come on over when you’ve recovered, she said and left me alone with my thoughts. She was always better at steering the conversation, anyway. Lucky me.

There would come a time very soon that there would be an end to this…all this. I could feel it. I just knew it was coming. Long before the mountain would blow its top and kills us all, this will all be gone…this room, this couch, this waterfront cabin, this garden, this view, this girlfriend and her mother…all this will be gone. I deserved more, she said. She cried about it a lot. There used to be a time that she told me she loved me without any trouble at all. It came freely. There used to be a time she would rest her head on my shoulder and lose herself in my voice. It soothed her so. Now, she hardly talked to me anymore and cries about it, not sure what went wrong. She dragged me all the way out to this coast so many years ago and it will all end soon, I’m sure. Then what will I do, as introverted as I am? I don’t meet people well. All my friends are her friends. I’ll probably have to live in some dumpy little apartment somewhere in Seattle and heaven forbid I should have to join one of them goddamned sex sites.

I looked down at myself through bleary eyes and while dying down a little, my hard on from the fantasy earlier was still clearly visible under the covers.


ArgosPlumyKooky 45F
3902 posts
4/2/2006 9:32 pm

i feel inadequte after reading your sh*t perfect


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:29 pm:
awww...thanks. you know, I've never heard the words inadequite and shit as a compliment before. good times.

rm_art_persists 51M
1789 posts
4/2/2006 10:46 pm

write on mi amigo.


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:30 pm:
...and right on to you, too

ediesedgewick 57F

4/3/2006 3:51 am

Whoa! I was believing it! Perfect ending.


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:33 pm:
my fantasies are so real its almost like real life. Thanks. The ending is a bit sad, but I like it, too.

saddletrampsk 54F

4/3/2006 8:21 pm

I'm sad..but glad you joined the sex site..


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:35 pm:
yeah. its sort of bittersweet, isn't it? But now I'm here.

skyking412004 53M
5363 posts
4/3/2006 9:07 pm

_____You brought out quite a lot of emotion in me with that one. I felt like I was living it. More so the reality aspect, than the dream.


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:37 pm:
yeah. i think everyone may have felt the reality part of my story, especially the ending. We're all here for a reason. That was mine.

cuteNEway 41F

4/3/2006 9:45 pm

um can i get one of those pills??


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:39 pm:
I still have some of the vikoden somewhere. Thats some amazing stuff. I haven't decided to use it 'recreationally" but maybe I should.

Looking4sex44240 54F

4/5/2006 10:09 am

To bad it was a dream/pills..very erotic


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/5/2006 6:40 pm:
the fantasies I continiously have even without vikoden. I have quite the imagination. thanks for stopping by.

skyking412004 53M
5363 posts
4/6/2006 2:17 am

_____Are you saying that marriage was yours? The one with no sex?


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/6/2006 12:48 pm:
no....I never married her, but we were together four years. I was hoping things would turn aroud for the better.

mm0206 68F
7767 posts
4/7/2006 9:48 am

"I see...now"
said the blind man.
You are truly a gifted writer. I was believing that part of the dream. It just sounded like some situation that you would find yourself in. kinda had me going there........ for a moment .. especially the second and third time I read it.
Truthfully it pulls you right in there. What an imagination.

Should I write more plaudits?

hugs...m.


AtomicArtist0 replies on 4/7/2006 12:33 pm:
no...you don't need to write anymore plaudits. I've come to that conclusion after looking that word up in the dictionary. (I'm stupid sometimes). But your words here are plaudits enough. Thank you.

catseyes23 61F

10/11/2006 1:27 am

"There would come a time very soon that there would be an end to this…all this. I could feel it. I just knew it was coming. Long before the mountain would blow its top and kills us all, this will all be gone…this room, this couch, this waterfront cabin, this garden, this view, this girlfriend and her mother…all this will be gone. I deserved more, she said. She cried about it a lot. There used to be a time that she told me she loved me without any trouble at all. It came freely. There used to be a time she would rest her head on my shoulder and lose herself in my voice. It soothed her so. Now, she hardly talked to me anymore and cries about it, not sure what went wrong. She dragged me all the way out to this coast so many years ago and it will all end soon, I’m sure. Then what will I do, as introverted as I am? I don’t meet people well. All my friends are her friends. I’ll probably have to live in some dumpy little apartment somewhere in Seattle and heaven forbid I should have to join one of them goddamned sex sites."

...and 6 months later your dream came true, darling!!


AtomicArtist0 replies on 10/11/2006 12:38 pm:
yes...it probably was six months to the day this event happened that I joined this site. I'm not sure if its a dream come true but here I am.

r3dsand 38M

1/24/2007 3:41 pm

This was my fave out of the three ...


AtomicArtist0 45M
6015 posts
1/24/2007 9:21 pm

thanks man, duely noted.


OboesHonedIambs 62F

1/25/2007 3:36 pm

The story brought me into it and I liked the twists in it. Good work!

Instant Human -- Just Add Coffee


AtomicArtist0 replies on 1/25/2007 5:30 pm:
well, thank you. I like this one, too. its so depraved

memeanne74 42F
5991 posts
10/18/2007 2:54 pm

Umm hmm....you shameless degenerate ..

I liked the lascivious nature as you took the daughter and wanted the mother.

We all have those uninhibited dreams....this was deliciously scandalous !

I fancied it quite a bit...

What else you got ?

xoxo,
~*Lissa

" I think the quality of sexiness comes from within. It is something that is in you or it isn't and it really doesn't have much to do with breasts or thighs or the pout of your lips."


AtomicArtist0 replies on 10/18/2007 11:31 pm:
scandalous is right. I still fantasize about her mom. Still!! And to think...we never even got along. She was so assertive and self centered. She interrupted everytime anyone talked and dominated the conversation for most of an hour. She had very limited interests and hated everything outside of her narrow point of view. She was rich, arrogant and condiscending...yet I still fantasize about her. There was just something so bold and primal about her. I wish I didn't think of her ever again. I wish for a lot of things.

always1deringf 47F

3/3/2008 7:07 pm

Wow, I was sucked totally into the drug hazed fantasies...didn't see the end coming. you got me. wow.

I'm going for more.


AtomicArtist0 replies on 3/3/2008 10:56 pm:
awww thanks glad you liked.

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