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6/15/2006 10:18 am

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6/19/2006 7:26 am


Look at me.

What is it you see?

Do you see me?

I cant, how can you?

Do you know who i am?

What do you expect?

I don't, why do you?

Love me?

Do you know how?

Can you feel it?

I cant, so why lie?

Are you listening to me?

What can you hear?

screaming silence?

Touch me?

Can you feel my emotions?

Does it burn?

My hands are cinders.

Remember me?

What do you think of?

Past memories of a person?

The past is gone.

Stop trying, just accept it.

You will never understand.

YuMeAnTheShadows 49M

6/17/2006 2:38 am

I don't usually get poetry. I usually find it too difuse, convoluted, or abstract. Yet, somhow this touched me. I eunderstood the most basic question of life. Are we really one or really connected? Do my emotions effect those around me or go unnoticed? More importantly, do I get your emotions, understand what you feel and accept those feeling? I don't think you want me to figure out why you feel the way you do all the time. That is what therapy is for. But you want anyone who thinks they are close to you to understand what you feel, and in some instances understand why you feel it. Have I gotten the gist of this poem? I hope so, because your blog has entertained me, and made me laugh so hard at other times, I'd like to think I am connecting with you psychicly from the other side of the planet. Also, I can not help but notice that this Poem reminds me of a song. The title is escaping me, and I just searched in a songbook of John Denver songs, but the lyric I am thinking of was something about "the coming of the winter" Your feelings in this poem reminded me of how I usually feel as fall leads into winter (Late November into December up here in the northern Hemisphere) and that song has a similar feeling. As we are just days away from the Summer (northern Hemisphere) / Winter (Southern hemisphere) soltace, I wonder if the seaonal changes are effecting your feelings and reflections?

Well its 5:40 am here and I have yet to sleep, so, I am signing off. Please keep up you blog, and I promise to read it all and respond to rthe entrie that move me most. Your friend, Kent.

rm_FloydianEpic 43M
5 posts
6/19/2006 5:01 am

When I see you do you see me?

Or do you look just strait through?

What the hell was I just talking about!!

Sorry for the interruption.But my brain hurts and you are making me think to much.

OOppss I think I just stood in something

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